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FEELINGS

FEELINGS


Feelings,
Masters of my destiny
Lords of my life
Strength of my dreams
Instigators of my actions

Burning fire you are 
Consuming my whole 
Being:
My heart
My mind 
My soul
My spirit,  
As you relentlessly
Demand: 
To be conceived
To be formulated 
To be understood
To be expressed!

A Herculean task it is,
I swear, 
Such an enterprise,
For how one could ever
Constrain, you, the unconstrained 
And mold you into:
Phonemes
Syllables
Words
Phrases
Sentences 
And still retain 
Your explosive 
Dynamism?
 
No language exists,
So vast
So deep
So accurate
So supple 
As to pay justice,
To your intensity
To your desire
To your beauty
To your love!

Thus, having no
Alternative, 
I turn to the only language
There is,
The one that the 
Cosmos speaks,
And
The universe alone
Comprehends:
The language of 
Harmony,
That we humans 
POETRY name
BUT 
Even then 
To describe you
I AM UNABLE!



©Demetrios Trifiatis
   28 January 2013

 

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  1. Date: 2/8/2013 9:33:00 PM

    !!!

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 9:25:00 PM

    I give you a 7 This is breath taking. A master piece. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 11:27:00 AM

    This is a masterful and energetic write my friend! I really loved reading this dynamic and amazing poem this afternoon! What a powerful piece! You have portrayed poetry in a beautiful light Demetrios! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 9:05:00 AM

    I must say..........this was so very powerful! Amazing in it's beauty. I'm placing it in my favorites to read again and again and savor! Great work. :) So estela ena minima ekthes...then ton ethes?

    Trifiatis Avatar Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 1/28/2013 9:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you! I am happy for that. Oxi den elava!
  1. Date: 1/28/2013 3:40:00 AM

    wowo! MR. Adonis,,..the Greek God...of beauty and intelligence..I am totaLLY impressed with this awesome epigram...you are a very masterful writer...

    Trifiatis Avatar Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 1/28/2013 4:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    So kind of you! Thank you!