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Summer Or Winter , Guns Are Thirsty For Blood

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Summer Or Winter , Guns Are Thirsty For Blood

                                

                                          
                                            'midst winter snow flakes
                                     masked men like black moths,with guns...
                                          shots ooze out  thick blood.



                                                            ****
                                            
                                                     under  summer sun
                                              skinny  boys playing in slums...
                                                 guns meet orphaned cries.

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  1. Date: 2/27/2013 12:58:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win...David

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 4:48:00 PM
    wow, your set is REALLY good. Congrats. I enjoyed these.

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 10:39:00 AM
    Many congratulations on your number 1 Mehnaz xx

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 9:08:00 PM
    Mehnaz, Congratulations with your winning poem in Rix's "A "Gun"-o-ku " contest. Goodnight~ LINDA

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 7:42:00 PM
    I like how you worked so hard on your entries. They are good images for a sad topic.

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 1/28/2013 10:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Andrea...it was a hard one... guns.... :-)
  1. Date: 1/28/2013 1:51:00 PM
    Mehnaz, a very sad image.. I wish blood was not a part of life... well you know what I meant to say...xox~PD

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 1/28/2013 10:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    yup, I understand Linda....one symbol many images....thanks Linda...
  1. Date: 1/28/2013 11:25:00 AM
    Just wish a weapons free world - Good luck in the contest. - Well done! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 1/28/2013 10:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you,Anne Lise for your visit...
  1. Date: 1/28/2013 10:51:00 AM
    Very expressive and descriptive work..Sad that evil lives in our world..Maybe you will be the one that changes it..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 1/28/2013 10:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Sara for the blessing....I appreciate your comments....