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A Spark In The Twilight Woods

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A Spark In The Twilight Woods

                                        A Spark In The Twilight Woods.
                                 

                                       A spark and a moment, fueled
                                     the burning embers of my lonely heart ,
                                       set the fire of a dead love ablaze,
                                    absorbed every tiny drop of lethargy 
                            set  flames lurking high, held mournful passions aflame,
                                             …a mesmerized nymph, 
                                         I sparkled, in a golden trance.
                                    Like dry grass on fire ,it fed on fast
                                              licked away in hunger
                                              whatever came its way.
                              Nature and fire entwined in a sensuous amber glow,
                                      swayed in a dance –fiery and wild.
                               A moment etched sharp in eternal timelessness,
                                       Ah, born was the beauty of love
                                             in deep twilight woods…

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  1. Date: 1/31/2013 3:27:00 PM
    Congrats on your great win..Sara

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 2/1/2013 7:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Sara
  1. Date: 1/31/2013 1:38:00 PM
    Your poem is really good, I can see why it was chosen. Congratulations.

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 2/1/2013 7:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Richard
  1. Date: 1/31/2013 4:47:00 AM
    congrats on a great win Mehnaz

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 2/1/2013 7:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you
  1. Date: 1/30/2013 9:06:00 PM
    Mehnaz, your poem is very deep... Congratulations in Nathans, precious moment contest...xox~PD

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 2/1/2013 7:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks pd
  1. Date: 1/30/2013 8:00:00 PM
    lovely image, thanks for the Precious poem' Nate

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 2/1/2013 7:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Nate
  1. Date: 1/28/2013 2:01:00 PM
    Hi, Mehnaz to be born among the beauty in these woods. good feeling flames.. hope your the lonely heart finds a new passion in the deep sparks... xox~pd

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 1/28/2013 9:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks pd~ heart ever borders on loneliness, happily so.... :-)
  1. Date: 1/28/2013 11:33:00 AM
    Wonderful imagery I hope you enter my contest! Let me know..I do so enjoy your writes. Light & Love

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 1/28/2013 9:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Debbie for the kind words... I will work on your contest for sure...
  1. Date: 1/27/2013 8:34:00 PM
    This is great, I love the visuals. Thanks so much for your visit, I appreciate your comments.

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 1/28/2013 9:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Richard ...Am really glad you liked it...