Insight in Custody by Yanny Widjanarko

Insight in Custody

Love, these days were so dark Frequently rain kissed the ground This is the moment when mellow tries to embark Right after the thunder shouts, echoing its mighty sound Love, these days I sink into numbness Blank pages haunt my enthusiasm Chasing days without any sense, am I getting dumb? Or is it just reality which tried to sabotage the poet's paradigm? Love, these days I sit behind the rain My mind was occupied but remaining behind a closed curtain I forget how to start, hypnotized by haze Insight in custody, I trapped within this phase Special thank's to Debbie Guzzi :D

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/27/2013 6:27:00 PM

Seems the weather is captivating us today. I enjoyed rain kissed poem.

Yanny Widjanarko Date: 1/27/2013 6:36:00 PM

Thank you Rick :D, It always been rainy days out there, I also miss the sun, just like you :D - hug, yanny

Rachel St.Cross

Date: 1/27/2013 6:18:00 PM

............. ‡ Ps., I Am Going To Favour This Exceptional Painting In Both Uniquely Spoken As Profound; 'Beautiful!' *

Yanny Widjanarko Date: 1/27/2013 6:22:00 PM

Thank you Rachel, thanks to Debbie, she inspired me to use the word 'phase', before i put it with phrase, Glad to see you visit Rachel :D - hug, yanny

Rachel St.Cross

Date: 1/27/2013 6:16:00 PM

‡ 'I Trapped Within This Phase.' ˜ After Rereading This Magnificent Verse, Spoken Amid The Loveliest In Voices, Sweet Beautiful Yanny ˜ I Love The Paradigm, Standing Behind The Rain, The Feel At Perhaps A Lose Or That Something Seems To Be Missing Whileas The Raging Waves Of A Turbulent Roller-Coasters Ride May Subside ? Sooo Many Layers: Curtains, Custody, Hypnotized ˜ Makes Myself For Whatever Reason Consider, 'When I Was A Child, I Spoke I Understood I Reasoned ?' ˜ My Love, Always, Rachel *

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/27/2013 3:29:00 PM

[mellow tries][I sink into numbness][blank pages haunt][Or is it just][Love these days I sit behind the rain/My mind is occupied, remaining behind a closed curtain/I forget how to start..][I'm trapped within this phrase? or phase?] Wonderful content just wonder work on the verb tenses. Light & Love

Yanny Widjanarko Date: 1/27/2013 4:45:00 PM

Thank you Debbie, :) i fixed it already, glad that this poem is not strange anymore in grammar hahaha :D- hug, yanny

Anne Lise Andresen

Date: 1/27/2013 12:09:00 PM

Strange to think that the weather has as much to do with how we feel. - A very good poem my friend Yanny. - I hope the sun will shine on you in the new week. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Yanny Widjanarko Date: 1/27/2013 2:56:00 PM

Thank you Anne, but sometimes rain makes my mood but unfortunately this time is not that strong :p, hopefully next time i could do better :) - hug, yanny

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