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haiku 31

cracking ice
cuts through the silence --
a leaf drifts

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  1. Date: 3/28/2013 12:28:00 PM

    I agree with Andrea! You've got this form down pat.

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 12:50:00 AM

    I don't know why, but I always liked that crunchy sound the ice makes when you walk across it. A leaf drifts... is autumn ending and the winter just beginning?

  1. Date: 2/20/2013 6:18:00 AM

    Going back to read some of what I missed...I always love your haiku, Debbie.

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 8:42:00 AM

    a frozen leaf, I bet! Hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 7:01:00 PM

    beautiful contrast!

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 11:21:00 AM

    Hi Debbie have seen and heard this in england this week, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 11:19:00 AM

    beautiful Debbie, love this one..You are a 'poeticpedia' to me..thanks a lot for sharing...

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 12:23:00 AM

    ooooo!! Highness!! How wonderful!!I can feel the chill!! lol big hugs, love you bunches...Cap'n deb

  1. Date: 1/27/2013 9:59:00 PM

    Dropping by to pick up Haiku pointers. Nicely done Debbie.

  1. Date: 1/27/2013 7:12:00 PM

    It is amazing the poetry nature provides when one is quite enough to hear. Beautiful.

  1. Date: 1/27/2013 6:17:00 PM

    Crunch, crunch. Haven't heard that noise this winter yet. Thanks goodness. Love it, Debbie. Great Haiku!

  1. Date: 1/27/2013 5:45:00 PM

    Great penned Debbie :D - hug, yanny

  1. Date: 1/27/2013 5:01:00 PM

    ‡ Although Myself To Set Amid A Moment In Silence As I Ponder, My Sweet Beautiful Precious Debbie ˜ I Find A Lost Little Baby Eye'd Doe, All Alone As Crossing An Ice Lain Meadow ? Suddenly Startled At The Crackling Aneath Their Hoofs And Now Aware, That Something Seems Strangely Out Of Place And Or Amiss ? Diggg Your Amazing Gifted Beauty's Cool In Suspensefuls Intriguing Haiku; Super Ku's ˜ My Love, Always, Rachel *

  1. Date: 1/27/2013 2:52:00 PM

    Yes, it was a little naughty...but silly...so, I deleted it. I was trying to make fun of "rhyming poetry" : )

  1. Date: 1/27/2013 12:39:00 PM

    Lovely write!

  1. Date: 1/27/2013 9:32:00 AM

    There is a poem(?) dedicated to you! Im sorry! LOL!

  1. Date: 1/27/2013 8:13:00 AM

    nice imagery