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Unconditional Love

I gave you love 
Without condition
Held you close
Beneath my wing
Took you high
And helped you sing
Guided you through
Stormy weather
Tickled you
With my feather
Cheered you up
When you were down
Never let you
Hit the ground
Danced with you
In the rain
With my tears
I wiped your pain
But now it’s time
You took the reins
As I take flight
To tranquil plains

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  1. Date: 2/8/2013 1:59:00 PM

    Now that's what I'm talking about.

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 7:19:00 PM

    There is absolutely no better love than unconditional love, this is an excellent piece of work, and thank you for your comments

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 11:58:00 AM

    ANOTHER GREAT WRITE SOUNDS LIKE YOU GIVE YOUR HEART ALOT AND THE OTHER PERSON GAV NOTHING BACK SELVISH LOVER X DAVIDSCOTT

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 7:41:00 AM

    Neat structure, rhyming and exceptional language! Well done Elizabeth!! Love, Keith

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 1/29/2013 10:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Keith, love Elizabeth
  1. Date: 1/28/2013 8:32:00 AM

    ‡ Makes Myself Think Of Sweet Tristen's Poem About Gertrude And 'The Princess Chronicles,' Sweet Beautiful Elizabeth ˜ I Can See Her Precious Little Furry Fuzzy Head Lying 'Pon Her Mother's Loving Breast Saying Goodbye As She Finally, Prepares To Leave The Nest, And Fly Away Albeit Still A Bit Awkward With Her Fluttering Flapping Frenzied, Tiny Wings, LOL, Priceless Baby Girl! ˜ Such A Wonderful Loving Poem Here Beautiful Elizabeth ˜ Love Always & Forever, Rachel * Ps., Thank You For Your Beauty's, Lovely Sweet Visit *

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 1/28/2013 12:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :) Can't say I have come across that one yet Rachel, but it sounds wonderful, where is that fellow Tristen these days :) thank you for your wonderful comment, put a smile on my face as ever, love Elizabeth
  1. Date: 1/27/2013 8:14:00 AM

    NICE FLOW GOOD JOB

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 1/27/2013 2:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Autry, love Elizabeth