Submit a Poem
Get Your Premium Membership
spacer

Oops, something happened to this poem. It is no longer here.

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
 
  1. Date: 4/22/2013 7:00:00 PM

    I felt this poem like waking among someone's thoughts. Oh so sad thoughts .I hope you know you must be your own light; Create your own grace. Rock On

  1. Date: 4/1/2013 5:12:00 PM

    Just a beautiful dedication to Joshua and a masterful collaboration, blessings to you and Holly

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 11:09:00 AM

    When I first read this I almost thought as though two different trains of thought were going on every other line. Then I read that this was a collaboration and that I wasn't so far off! I am lost in the allure of your words... dew-bespangled flowers... silvery voice... such lovely descriptions that put me right into a fantasy book!

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 11:43:00 PM

    very great and charming poem :) congratulation both of you my great poet and poetess <3 luv and lights Sk

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 9:01:00 AM

    A lovely collaboration. This is sure to bring some healing....Bless you for this dedication.

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 1:46:00 PM

    A meaningful collaboration. Beautiful. J

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 8:30:00 PM

    I love the dew-bespangled flowers. Rich and vivid throughout. Good work, David.

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 12:11:00 PM

    Intensly vague...in the best possible way! I think its great, David.

  1. Date: 2/1/2013 5:46:00 AM

    a very powerful collaboration my friend David.. I can feel your emotions...thanks for sharing and thanks for stopping by...my avatar is taken a year ago, Hugs, Maria :)

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 12:50:00 PM

    Ah, how beautifully your lines meld together as if souls combined in thought. A lovely poem!

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 9:07:00 AM

    A beautiful collab..Just beautiful

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 3:10:00 PM

    Great collaborative work David (& Holly), but then ... your work is always great... Terry (& thanks for your kind words...)

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 1:21:00 PM

    a wonderful and caring poem David, and Holly.

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 12:40:00 PM

    What a lovely, touching dedication to Joshua. David, I'm ill and can only visit here occasionally. There is no cure, but some people life for years with neuropathy of the autonomic nervous system. Thanks for asking. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 4:22:00 AM

    A beautiful collaboration David. Tell you friend Holly I enjoyed reading this ;) hope you are having a good week..

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 11:47:00 AM

    Hi David what a collab I nearly cried reading this my friend brill, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 11:04:00 AM

    So beautifully melded together David!! what a fabulous job!!! I love it....big hugsss, love ya, Cap'n deb

  1. Date: 1/27/2013 7:12:00 PM

    David, I agree with you.. Holly is a dear sweet lady. I was thinking of her the other day. A heartfelt dedication... God bless.... PD

  1. Date: 1/27/2013 5:04:00 PM

    wow, this was seamless. I had no idea it was written by two different people. Very in synche!!!

  1. Date: 1/27/2013 11:48:00 AM

    This is a tremendous and amazing write! Such a compassionate person you are David, I'm sure Holly appreciated this terrific poem my friend! I truly loved reading this magnificent piece this afternoon! What a intriguing poem you have written here! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 1/27/2013 9:05:00 AM

    The last couplet is a summary expression of the emotion of this poem in stark visual terms. It is haunting. The collaboration is wonderful. May I also thank-you for your comment? I appreciate it very much.