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The shine

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The shine

The angst comes with a grip...

Strapping to the shaft of my silver gun

It shines on my runs

I like to eat when I kill
Because killing isn't fun

Just like when swimming underwater satisfies the sun

Coming up again gives ya the bump

Seeing the daylight once again-

Feeling that heat like a mexican

When thinking of blessings and-

The rest of the world

In a big bubble with smoke and glitter


The regular people have splinters

They are livers

But need help

Because the first world acts bitter


It never shows how much fitter-

Anybody could be if bid come ta hither

If one were to become prisoner

And needed time

Like listeners...

The the smallest of us all

Hearing the most

And breathing the boast

Coming again and again

Needing nothing but stories of kin

People they love being here for them

And so can be you

Just don't ever say shoe

And they will hear you

-Jump up and do

Because the rest of the world says wait to chose

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