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Underwater Blues

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Underwater Blues

Blue, for love of the depressed days
	Underwater I live or die
	Nowhere can I really hide

Bewildered the water dismays
	Sky absorbs the winter hunger
	A floating bird doesn’t blunder

Sadness pulls me under and lays
	Casts spells of confusion bequeath
	Leaves me to fall, sink underneath

I’m frozen with sorrow always
	Constantly I am beaten down
	To hold the great ocean god’s crown

I do not hear what the sea says
	While keeping me there with sadness
	I must have strength to rid of stress

With all my strength I start to pray
	Not knowing if there’s any hope
	I see that I must stand and cope

Blue, for love of the depressed days
Bewildered the water dismays
Sadness pulls me under and lays
I’m frozen with sorrow always
I do not hear what the sea says
With all my strength I start to pray

Russell Sivey

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  1. Date: 1/27/2013 4:33:00 PM

    hey is their a constanza contest going on? that is the form of my good friend connie!! wonderful.

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 9:35:00 PM

    an utterly magnificent poem with intense emotion ...something different for u Russell luv but far superior .. a premier write of poetic essence .. so great to read u my friend ..thankxx for prayers and sweet comments during my health crisis ..on slow mend but will try to be on more as health allows.. wonderful words ..

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 8:20:00 PM

    I believe what you have here meets all the requirements of a constanza poem. It is interesting reading.

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 4:56:00 PM

    Good luck in the contest..These are not the easiest to write but you did good..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 4:46:00 PM

    Dear Russell, the night’s darkness will not last as dawn’s rays of hope are close by! Soon you will come out of the water to breath the fresh air of a new beginning! Your verses, regardless the mood, are powerful and provoking. Thank you for sharing!

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 3:51:00 PM

    Love the way you words flowed in this Constanza Russell. The depth of feeling is excellently penned. Thanks for sharing and commenting on my poetry. Wishing you and great weekend. Hugs and luv, Gail