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A-Heart-Broken

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A-Heart-Broken

Tears of blood is dripping down form my eyes.
My heart feels like a stampede of horse has just
ran over it a hundred times.
It feels so lifeless and weak.
We used to be one.
Now we are none.
Our love was strong.
We can fall off a plane and never hit rock 
bottom. 
A boat can sink, but we would not drown. 
I cannot figure out what I did wrong. 
I feel like a lyric of a love song.
This feeling inside of me,
is this how the rest of my life would be.
I feel so abused.
I feel so used.
I feel like someone just threw hot acid all 
over my body.
Though my love for you will never change,
I know that you hear has been rearranged.
I am still crying because I 
accepted being heart broken
by the one and only that mistaken.
My eyes are now ‘awaken.’

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  1. Date: 1/26/2013 6:08:00 PM
    Great poem!

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 1:37:00 PM
    A touching but well written poem, Sabaine. - Welcome to P-Soup, hope you will have a lot of fun to share your poems here with us. - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)