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Petals Of The Night

Such is the beauty of spring,
Filling our eyes with pleasure and
The bounty of fruit the flowers bring.

The silver glow of diamond stars
Begets the beauty of the buds 
which softly beckon 'hear we are'.

The newborn nightness doth surround
The pastel pink of cherry blossoms
And a gentle breeze guides petals to the ground.

Ray Dillard

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  1. Date: 4/6/2013 7:15:00 PM

    Excellent write. Enjoyed very much.

  1. Date: 2/1/2013 1:54:00 PM

    I agree with Debbie here......each stanza is a lovely triplet of beautiful thoughts for the mind to dream upon! I loved this lovely poem!

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 9:11:00 PM

    Hello Ray, it was nice receiving a comment from your pen. :-).... About your poem: I wish to see this image after the morning sun. Spring can bring beauty from one night to the other. In passion, the ground endures in a kiss upon Earth. lovely~LINDA

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 7:18:00 PM

    A lovely way to do petals in the wind, Ray! I didn't see a poem like you just described to me. Was it posted here? Anyway, I sure am ready for spring. your weather sounds awesome.

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 2:38:00 PM

    Nice to see the rhyme in triplets for a change! Light & Love

    Dillard Avatar Ray Dillard Date: 1/28/2013 2:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Deb. with this one I like to read the verses in different order.. I can't decide what is best. I hope that's a good sign! Thanks for stopping by..RAY