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Troubled

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Troubled

He remembers nothing
He dreams
He wakes in silence
From screams

Dead air passes
His lips
And he breathes it back in
Discontent

He is troubled
And sleep is a bitter comfort

*Depression

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  1. Date: 5/8/2013 4:10:00 AM

    :( The night doesn't last forever...the is the glorious dawn to brighten his soul.

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 5:11:00 PM

    Powerful one into the depths of depression. Quite like the feel of this one. Love dark verses - as you may have noticed. ;) No but seriously, I really like this one. Especially the last line. A bitter comfort. So true. Another great one. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 11:24:00 PM

    rereading this one. I am not sure I can find one of yours to comment to. I may have seen them all now. Let me take a quick look.

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 5:13:00 AM

    wonderful poetry this,,, the poem so visual, so heartfelt...

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 1:18:00 PM

    I like the eeriness of this one, Caleb, as if he is perplexed about it all. I've been having sleepless nights of quiet dread. Wish I could make the feeling go away!