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When You Are Gone

When my arms are empty 
I only think of you
When my lips aren’t kissing 
I really feel quite blue
When you’re not there to hold
My bed it feels so cold
Until we meet once more
And say hello behind a locked door
I will wait patiently 
Knowing you will come to me
© ~GG~ 25/01/2012


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  1. Date: 2/1/2013 9:39:00 PM

    I like this poem Mandy. I enjoyed reading tonight. Thanks and good night. Lucilla

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 3:15:00 PM

    Congrats on your win Mandy. Romance from the heart.Think the best poems come from the heat. Warm Smiles Always, Connie

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 3:12:00 PM

    lovely write, Mandy - congrats on your wins, my friend

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 12:25:00 PM

    Dear G.G., Who could resist such an invitation? Very warm and romantic writing! Enjoyed it! Thank you for your comment. I am back!

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 12:14:00 PM

    nice one, mandy! i love the ending...

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 5:48:00 AM

    Sunshining and freezing here Goldie [a two layers of comforters night!] Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/25/2013 9:37:00 PM

    There is romance in the air. Remember to unlock the door so he can get in.

  1. Date: 1/25/2013 3:51:00 PM

    Too much passion in this short poem, Golden Girl!! : )..."behind a locked door"...interesting...I hope Luke is not reading this poem! ; ) Have a nice evening. Ruben.

  1. Date: 1/25/2013 3:49:00 PM

    Soup Mail!

  1. Date: 1/25/2013 3:18:00 PM

    beautiful and heart warming poetry from you GG,,

  1. Date: 1/25/2013 2:29:00 PM

    This is quite the tenderhearted write my friend! I really loved reading this delightful poem this afternoon! What a fun loving piece, Great Work!!