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love

love
the ice
melts

a four syllable for Chris

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  1. Date: 1/25/2013 2:16:00 PM

    Aha! Now you are really slimming them down! I might have to call you "Slim" from now on. Very neat how you used ice again, but with a completely different analogy. Well, you passed the dare with flying colours.