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Lucifer

You drew me in had me dreaming
Of being
Convinced it was define doing
That we would end up becoming
I wanted to wear that crown
Ornamented
Like a blessing in my mind’s eye I saw it
White dressing, champagne sipping
Love making, House keeping
Baby making, family building
Lives intertwining
But I was just dreaming
Foolishly Fantasizing
I was just simply entertainment
Something to do
An achievement
Dark Angel

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  1. Date: 3/27/2013 11:14:00 PM

    Whoa...the words, "I was just simply entertainment" is like scratching a chalkboard, that got my attention. You can feel the emotion in this gem. Powerful Write Lady!

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 8:02:00 AM

    This is such a powerful poem. You are a wonderful free verse writer!

  1. Date: 1/25/2013 7:39:00 AM

    This one cuts really deep into the soul....heartfelt write!!

    Aveau Avatar Abigale Aveau Date: 1/25/2013 7:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Pace. This was an anger write.