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After the gun shots

an empty nest.. mother runs her fingers on the scribbled walls 25th Jan 2013 for Gwen's Gun-o-ku contest

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  1. Date: 1/28/2013 12:26:00 PM

    great haiku Yesha that I felt like crying, it touched my heart so much..how have you been, and how is your mom and the kids...life is super busy Yeshoo, so sorry I am late commenting..

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 9:02:00 AM

    Very nice haiku here yesha.Best wishes to you.

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 9:10:00 PM

    I feel your words Yesha my friend .. but not to worry for children return eventually and nest is full again .. my sons are my rock especially during my health crisis ..my hubby too .. have so missed u but will be on slow mend for a while ..thankxxx for luv and concern ..

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 3:28:00 PM

    lol, had a chuckle here : )

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 1:32:00 PM

    To erase or not erase that is the question?...Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 1:27:00 PM

    This is very good, Yesha. I have a question for you. soupmail.

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 10:46:00 AM

    The poor mother ...... - Very good Yesha! - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 9:59:00 AM

    this is amazing Yesha,

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 12:09:00 AM

    A lot of implied memories and possible misery. Very good haiku.