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Adrift

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Adrift

Adrift

I found myself adrift
alone out on the sea
a leaky boat
no overcoat
and very little brie

The tide began to shift
great waves engulfing me
they pulled me down
without a sound
and I could not swim free

But low there was a rift--
a crack in time--to be
a way to win
and to begin
returning from the sea...

~db1242013~


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  1. Date: 5/4/2013 7:58:00 AM
    There's a childlike innocence which is very appealing in your writing! L & L

  1. Date: 2/10/2013 6:19:00 PM
    !!!

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 9:32:00 AM
    Cool... Where in time did you end up?

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 1/29/2013 10:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Lol. Thank you Carol. I'm not sure yet. I don't think the journey's over. Good to hear from you. Hope all is well. Big hugs love deb
  1. Date: 1/25/2013 1:41:00 AM
    Cap'n Deb you have been so long at sea you must be less than half the size you were and your beautiful skin must be all wrinkly and brown, oh hang on sorry I was thinking of a fishing net ha ha ha....absolutely delighted to see that great smile and your lovely words here, please get signed permission from us before you leave on another little jolly....David

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 1/25/2013 8:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    BAAAHAHAHAHAA!!! Too funny!! I'm still LOL!!! And Sir, YesSir! Signed permission LOL!! Thank you?? Big Big Huggss!! Love ya bunches, Cap'n Deb
  1. Date: 1/24/2013 9:28:00 PM
    Hullo, Cap'n Deb -- a well-written, meaningful, allegorical poem. Very nice to see that you have returned after being adrift at sea(I think that I would have understood the allegory without the footnote and theme classification....but who knows, I can be slow at times lol).

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 1/25/2013 8:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :) Chris! You're never slow...and thank you dear one. Big Hugggss!!! Love ya bunches... Cap'n Deb