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Song

I wrote a little poem that went toot toot toot.
With every second line do-op do-op.
It started with a scale that went doe ray me.
and had a tiny chorus of tick tick tock.

I added tiny rests that went sigh sigh sigh.
I balanced them with sounds that went ring ring ring.
Now half the words were higher and half were low.
Until they reached the end and went ping ping ping.

I gave it to a man who played with instruments.
Who said he was the best and the king king king.
He wasn't very good when he started to play.
Until he opened up his mouth to sing sing sing.

And that is how I invented the song song song.
I hope I haven't bored and strung you along long long.

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  1. Date: 1/24/2013 5:26:00 PM
    So very cute my little patutte You make me want to sing along Long long long, Do you want to write a song with me Let's try and see Let's try and see What we can do Just me and you Send me a little soup And I'll give you the scoopxxx