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Ironed Shadows

Ironed Shadows

Her hands lay smooth
the coveralls worn thin
now wrinkled
once charged with earth

Mended armor from
courageous prices paid
embossed with crosshatched mending
stands raised in triumph

A home plate remembered
by innocence long abandoned
players made humble from
a boy's first slide for life

Vapors rise
from sprinkled droplets of water
beneath handled hot steel
making ready once more
the crusted yet unknowing weave
for kneeling of a different kind

Facing forced submission to other games
a purple-robed relentless hand
feeds rewards from gilded plate
accompanied by quiet silver tongue

Such are the scoring points of yet another kind

Youth's pure white
once starched crisp
ever ready for combat
now labors thread bare
atop the shoulders and arms
riding the reach for caramel-lathered memories
chased down with silver chaliced promises of still further kinds

Where is the love-smooth ironing hand now?

Costumes of rumpled thread
made anew by ironed caresses
now like the ether of memory
drift up past the seeing eyes into untethered emptiness

Tread carefully
lest you become wrinkle-free expediency
sliding voraciously into digital home plates
forever kneeling faithfully before promised obsolescent rewards
delivered smilingly from tarnished silver platters

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  1. Date: 2/2/2013 4:17:00 PM
    odin, a beautiful blessings with your creative top featured poem of the week. Take care and have yourself an excellent day... I know I sure am. :-) or should I say I will at least try. Always~ & ~ Forever*LINDA

  1. Date: 1/24/2013 6:47:00 PM
    Welcome to Poetry Soup. Quite a good write for your first entry! Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/24/2013 12:26:00 PM
    A very well-written poem, Odin. "lest you become wrinkle-free expediency/ sliding voraciously into digital home plates" -- your end-stanza wraps-up the theme in a strong manner. Welcome to the Soup!

    Roark Avatar Odin Roark
    Date: 1/24/2013 2:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for your comments. With so muchto write about in these days of difficulty, I hope I can perhaps project out concern that means something.