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One Fine Day

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One Fine Day

The morning, dawning wakes up one-eyed yawning
The birds are yelling at me “Get up! It is the end of night!”
The sun beams to me a warning; “Tis near the end of dawn and I’ll soon be giving all the land my living bright-white light”
So, daytime, my time, I look around to see this brand new day
So bright, so right, I thank God He gave to me another fine, fine day.

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  1. Date: 1/30/2013 7:17:00 AM

    Nice one Neil. Wouldn't it be nice to wake up every morning to a fine day. Not like that at the moment is it? How did you go with all this bad weathe? Are you from a State that was badly affected by it. I have a sister in Bundy. They were with my family at the time Mother Nature was doing her worst in Bundaberg and were stranded. They have just arrived back and were shocked at what they found. Luckily, they are okay mostely, but a lot of friends of theirs lost their homes or they were badly messed up. Pam.

  1. Date: 1/25/2013 2:09:00 PM

    A brand new day with new opportunities - Lovely! - Have a wonderful weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 1/23/2013 9:46:00 PM

    Nice to know there are still men in the world who wake up with this attitude. Beautiful.