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Down Where The Roses Bloom

Down where roses bloom in the month of June
The scented petals will mature and fall
Carried by zephrys of spring like balloons
Those petals in the wind over land sprawl

Pale pink petals carried away to land 
With a gental touch of kindness caress
The spring grasses with a delicate hand
Courteous as it lands with politesse

Each petal waits in turn to fly away
Their patience is long, each holds 'til time
They then 'pon the wind float and not betray
The Spirit within which is one sublime

Down where the roses bloom may the fruit grow
Let love lead as petals upon wind flow  

Sponsor: Gail Angel Doyle
Contest: Petals In The Wind
Written this 23rd day of January 2013
Written by: Sara Kendrick

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  1. Date: 2/8/2013 12:33:00 PM

    Look who's getting featured!

  1. Date: 2/7/2013 2:11:00 PM

    A dozen roses for this one. Congrats on the selection. LOve, daver

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 4:56:00 PM

    !!!

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 3:35:00 PM

    Sara, , :-) Congratulations with your creative top featured poem of the week. Take care and have yourself an excellent time here on the soup... I know I sure am. * or should I say I will at least try. Always~ & ~ Forever*LINDA"

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 3:39:00 AM

    Congrats dear Sara with this awesome sonnet of yours winning!

  1. Date: 2/3/2013 9:46:00 PM

    Many many congrats for this win dear Sara.

  1. Date: 2/3/2013 6:43:00 PM

    Congrats on another gorgeous winning poem in this contest.

  1. Date: 2/3/2013 4:26:00 PM

    This is a very beautiful poem and visual writing.

  1. Date: 2/3/2013 1:03:00 PM

    Another congrats for you luv, I am catching up after being away xx

  1. Date: 2/2/2013 6:55:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win!! :)

  1. Date: 2/1/2013 9:14:00 AM

    Love your last lines...wraps the poem up well. May love always drift on the petals in the wind.... Congrats on your win !!

  1. Date: 2/1/2013 1:59:00 AM

    I absolutely love the title and the way you repeat it in the sonnet...also the inner rhyme in the first line...beautiful my friend and congratulations! - Tim

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 9:12:00 PM

    Sara, . Congratulations :-) In Gail's "Petals In The Wind " contest. Always~ PD

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 6:18:00 PM

    Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 5:49:00 PM

    congrats on your win Sara

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 3:59:00 PM

    Congratulation on your win. Sara a beautiful poem, great imagery. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 2:43:00 PM

    Congratulations, Sara. Su

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 2:30:00 PM

    Your poetry make me happy... Keep writing Sara, a big congrats.... Hope weather has settled down to normal...

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 12:41:00 PM

    So lovely Sara!! Congratulations on your win!! Well done. Deb

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 12:16:00 PM

    Your like an angel with pen and ink. A purple skirted beauty who knows how to display nature at it's best, congrats on your big win Sara, blessings from me to you xxx

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 11:45:00 AM

    Sara, congratulations on your win in my Petals In The Wind contest luv. A very lovely poem inded. Luv, Gail

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 7:03:00 PM

    Lovely, simply lovely poem, I enjoy very much...Ellie

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 8:13:00 PM

    I like the way you put this together . Roses remind me of my mother, our driveway had a row of 8 rose bushes on one side. grew- up in country side of town.

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 3:26:00 PM

    lovely write indeed, my friend - hope it will ber a big winner

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 2:47:00 AM

    You really are in control of this captivating poem and beautiful portrayal of the pink petals. A lovely read. (^_^)

  1. Date: 1/24/2013 7:22:00 AM

    that contest is inspiring so many gorgeous poems. I love yours among them.

  1. Date: 1/23/2013 10:22:00 PM

    Very beautiful, Sara..

  1. Date: 1/23/2013 9:28:00 PM

    This is a truly beautiful write, worthy of a first place win! I really enjoyed reading this delightful and inspiring poem this evening! What a tender piece, Great Work!! PS I almost didn't see you here, your Premium Membership had expired, will you be renewing it? I hope you do!

  1. Date: 1/23/2013 3:53:00 PM

    I enjoyed your write this evening, Sara.I haven't been able to write one for this yet, good luck friend! Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/23/2013 2:50:00 PM

    ‡ Twas Just Gazing Upon The Most Beautiful Blonde Haired Lady, Sweet Beautiful Sara ˜ Her Priceless Eyes Seemed To Speak Soulful Matters Deep, And She Was Sooo Extremely Beautiful Unto My Heart Her Beauty, Beyound The Stars ˜ I Would Liken Her Loveliness In This Yesss, Your Own Beauty's Soft Of Gentles, Magical Beautiful Poe ˜ Again Your Fragrance Blooms Sweet; A Pacific Breeze, To Carry This Love's Treasure Unto My Faves; 'Majestic.' ˜ My Love, Always & Forever, Rachel *