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Below is the poem entitled WOW which was written by poet Neil Milliner. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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I looked up there into the sky and then I uttered WOW!
I looked then through my telescope then I said HOLY COW!
The beauty and the majesty almost made me cry
Oh God if this be heaven then I surely want to die
Its size and its magnificence I cannot comprehend
The eons of eternity with no beginning and no end
The endless ebb and flow of things that are and things that used to be
The scale not comprehensible to the likes of little me
Before I looked into the sky I thought I stood so tall
But in knowledge and in stature I now am mega Nano small

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  1. Date: 1/25/2013 2:28:00 AM

    Hey Neil - Welcome to poetry Soup! Always good to see another Aussie here :) u have an interesting & almost limerick wow factor to some of your poems. Glad i stopped by - the sky is definitely WOW - Shaz