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LOVE NOTES WAFTING

Like love notes wafting in the air Floating petals of multi myriad a-hue Brushing velvet on my shoulders, bare Flush of nature seems to give a cue! Floating petals of multi myriad a-hue As many a-drifting prismatic rainbows Flush of nature seems to give a cue, For two dancing hearts to come close. As many a-drifting prismatic rainbows Flutter vividly across melting, meeting eyes For two dancing hearts to come close, Splashing colors of romance in blue skies. Flutter vividly across melting-meeting eyes Visions of intermingled sweet fragrances, Splashing colors of romance in blue skies, Beckoning in love, the open secret entrances! Visions of intermingled sweet fragrances Melody of the cuckoo's song, its sweet urges, Beckoning in love: the open secret entrances Desires collide, into a dream, the sight merges. Melody of the cuckoo's song, its sweet urges Brushing velvet on shoulders bare.. Desires collide, into a dream, the sight merges Like love notes wafting in the air... Yesha Shah

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  1. Date: 2/3/2013 9:45:00 PM

    Many many congrats for this win dear yesha.

  1. Date: 2/3/2013 6:41:00 PM

    yours was most deserving of this placement,Yesha. BIG congrats to you, and how are you doing?

  1. Date: 2/3/2013 12:59:00 PM

    Congratulations on your winning spot Yesha luv i am proud to share it with you xx

  1. Date: 2/2/2013 6:53:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win!! :)

  1. Date: 2/1/2013 9:10:00 AM

    This is one of my favorites in this winner's list! What a lovely poem/pantoum! Excellent!

  1. Date: 2/1/2013 8:38:00 AM

    This has it's own melody !! I hear it, I see it !! So lovely !! I'll be watching for these love notes in the air !! lol Beautiful entry, beautiful win !! Congrats !!

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 9:01:00 PM

    Yesha. Congratulations :-) In Gail's "Petals In The Wind " contest. Always~ PD

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 6:17:00 PM

    Congrad's on your win, Yesha. Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 4:56:00 PM

    Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 3:49:00 PM

    Great descriptive winning work..Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 2:41:00 PM

    Congratulations, Yesha . Su

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 12:13:00 PM

    You take beauty to new heights with this poem Yesha, congrats on your well deserved big win love xxx

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 11:43:00 AM

    Yesha, congratulations on your win in my Petals In The Wind contest luv. Your poems is remarkablly penned. Great metaphors as well. Luv, Gail

  1. Date: 1/24/2013 1:12:00 PM

    WOW! Yesha, this poem is very beautiful and inspiring! I love it, nicely penned my dearest poet friend :)

  1. Date: 1/24/2013 9:01:00 AM

    Winning materila for Gail's contest..Very poetic quality..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 1/23/2013 5:49:00 PM

    Prisms of beauty from your floral pen, I enjoyed your poem tonight, love xxx

  1. Date: 1/23/2013 4:36:00 PM

    gorgeous imagery, Yesha. I really enjoyed this pantoum!

  1. Date: 1/23/2013 11:56:00 AM

    Very good Pantoum here!I like how you related romanticism with the contest theme.Best wishes.

  1. Date: 1/23/2013 11:52:00 AM

    Yes!