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Pistol

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Below is the poem entitled Pistol which was written by poet Ray Dillard. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Pistol

Loaded, close, ready
May I never hear it speak 
Resting cold--silent

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  1. Date: 4/22/2013 9:07:00 PM
    Ray Congratulations on your win!! This is fabulous. Deb

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 12:57:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win...David

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 4:42:00 PM
    Love yours, Ray. And I think it's the only one titled Pistol. Congrats.

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 11:02:00 AM
    Very nice Ray!Congrats on the win.

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 10:34:00 AM
    Many congratulations on your number 1 Ray xx

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 12:05:00 AM
    Congratulations on a poem loaded with emotion. Joyce

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 9:10:00 PM
    Ray-U hit this one right outta the ball park! Outstanding emotion in your haiku! Just brilliant! gwendolen

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 9:06:00 PM
    Hi Ray, Congratulations with your winning poem in Rix's "A "Gun"-o-ku " contest. Goodnight~ LINDA

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 10:29:00 PM
    This is very nice and the message that you send through it, Ray.