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  1. Date: 2/26/2014 10:53:00 PM
    I don't know if I pity the girl or the man opening the package. Great tone.

  1. Date: 2/24/2014 6:35:00 PM
    very well written, unfortunately all we get in life is in pretty package,that's why kids choose to play with box instead. Thank you Neil for this original poem,Ivy

  1. Date: 2/24/2014 12:35:00 PM
    Extremely amusing thank you.