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What An Arrangement

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What An Arrangement

My package arrived today!
Wrapped up so pretty!
All new and all mine!
I tore off the virginity with great excitement
But there was no wife in there;
Just a broken little girl.

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  1. Date: 2/26/2014 10:53:00 PM

    I don't know if I pity the girl or the man opening the package. Great tone.

  1. Date: 2/24/2014 6:35:00 PM

    very well written, unfortunately all we get in life is in pretty package,that's why kids choose to play with box instead. Thank you Neil for this original poem,Ivy

  1. Date: 2/24/2014 12:35:00 PM

    Extremely amusing thank you.