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the dream

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the dream

surprised a dream can tic you off
and make you change your mind

when once my soul was once aloft
frozen in a wierd sence of time

adamant was my resolve 
to always love and stay

my words and conversation
my testament and concentration

all betrayed this very day
in a dream that i still question

why would God send a dream
that would hurt my love so hard

i know the answer and i admit it i had did it 
and now i get it, why question God


(My last poem about April)

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  1. Date: 10/19/2013 6:36:00 PM
    I guess the dream was to tell you that you must move on with life. You have great memories but that is what they are now. In the past. love phyl