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A Living Change

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A Living Change

If I want it then I best go and get it
If I choose it then I best do it
If I want to go somewhere then why must I choose to hold oneself back
If I want change then why don't I try and make a change

I know Im a sinner and far from being a winner
I see my people eating good but me I usually miss breakfast and dinner
I keep looking for truth on the outside when infact I should be looking inner
I know I keep destroying my lungs and my liver

I know life can be crazy for this young man
I know if I want to be remebered I will have to take a certain indvidualized stand
I know I must do what I must and also do what I can 
I know this must be some sort of Gods plan

I go out writing with a bang
Im going to go married to this literature wearing a a diamond rang (ring)
Im going to write this *****until it gets sung until its finally sang
I do what I do to make some sort a life living change

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  1. Date: 1/22/2013 12:14:00 PM
    Being a winner ...... to be number one .... it is not so important in life, be yourself and do the best you can. - You are very good at writing poems ... it is not all that can do Travis! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

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    Date: 1/22/2013 12:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you for the comment and review .....other ppls views and advice helps me best ..........once again thank you for the review.....