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Out

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Below is the poem entitled Out which was written by poet Jack Jordan. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Out

Face down, dirty,
her damp hands 
flutter and stream
in memory of pure bliss’
hot breath of life,
her self-murder
a-way into
the shadow on her eyes.

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  1. Date: 5/22/2014 11:30:00 AM
    JACK, Congratulations, on having your poem featured on the Poetry Soup's home page. Hope you are enjoying the exposure. Hugs & Love ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 5/20/2014 10:51:00 AM
    Sounds like she ODd. Whatever, this one is compelling. Congrats on the selection. daver