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  1. Date: 3/31/2013 8:21:00 AM
    I love a good senyru! very accurate in few words. Enjoyed it!

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 9:08:00 PM
    You zapped me Marlon, wildly clever with so few words. Describes perfectly what goes on in a relationship!

  1. Date: 1/27/2013 11:22:00 AM
    Very well done Marlon! Perfect meter, content and title!! Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 1/25/2013 2:14:00 PM
    Amazing how you have captured so much emotion in so few words. Love does hurt, even when unintentional.

  1. Date: 1/24/2013 12:19:00 PM
    Marlon, you absolutely went to the core with this one; did it in so little words too ;)

  1. Date: 1/23/2013 10:29:00 AM
    I love your avatar Marlon, serrated sharp teeth, you sure know how to take a bite out of poetry, love, xxx

  1. Date: 1/23/2013 8:51:00 AM
    Absolutely love your new bio pic! ROTFLMAO! "Serrated edges"... you sure have that right! Hugs, Jack xox

  1. Date: 1/22/2013 2:18:00 PM
    Hey, Marlon! :) I hope all is good for you and yours. This lovely little senryu hold so much truth inside it. Some people think immediately of tough love, but I think more of a long distance relationship, perhaps.... Love and hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 1/22/2013 1:58:00 PM
    amazing senryu Marlon,,,so profound...

  1. Date: 1/22/2013 1:24:00 PM
    So true and well written, Marlon ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 1/22/2013 11:22:00 AM visually engaging and so so true!

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  1. Date: 1/22/2013 10:14:00 AM
    I love this piece here...when I first read it, I immediately thought about "tough love." There are a few other thoughts in mind but, everyone has a different interpretation. I love this Senryu.

  1. Date: 1/22/2013 9:53:00 AM
    or the lack of love....nice write Scribe