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Bad weather and broken washing machines

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Bad weather and broken washing machines

Your a good friend
And that was a good write
I'm going through a rough time
Must be the time of night
Pour me a drink too 
I think we could both use a swig
Captain, Jack, Soco? Your pick
We need a nice buzz
A little numbing for enjoyment
To forget about our problems
And for the moment, just enjoy life
This misery is apocalyptic
Its ridiculous as well
I hope things get better
Man a turn of tide would be swell
Its like we have stains on our shirts
And detergent isn't working
Bleach might not stain them
But all the sudden, the washer isn't working

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  1. Date: 2/3/2013 7:27:00 PM
    Like the way it flowed,,, does the washer flow now;} you have a great day anyway

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 1:50:00 PM
    I'll drink, laugh or argue with you anytime Jay - your the best - You have a good remedy for misery, and a resilient out look too - I respect the way you ascribe two qualities to misery - I can always rely on you to 'keep art real' - J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 1/22/2013 2:15:00 AM
    One unfortunate day, hope it goes well. - A good poem Jay, sorry but I had to smile a little too. - I wish you a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise

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    Date: 1/22/2013 2:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Haha dont feel bad, its a funny write about a horrible day. We have to laugh, thats what makes it better.