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Effect

I lay underneath the stars at night, without you they don't shine as bright

Blue skies are shades of gray, cloudy, with no sun in sight

Alone, with visions of your eyes, the only eyes that has ever danced with mine

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  1. Date: 1/31/2013 7:40:00 PM
    nicely done - JH

  1. Date: 1/22/2013 1:09:00 PM
    Enjoyed this write of yours!!

  1. Date: 1/22/2013 12:51:00 PM
    they dont shine. great line.