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a laser light

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a laser light

a laser light
marks the sniper's target --
a taxi waits

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  1. Date: 3/1/2013 9:50:00 PM
    Congratulations Miss Pitty Pat!! ;) you are so gifted!! Big ole Congrats on all your wins!! Love you bunches an miss you, Scarlet.

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 4:39:00 PM
    oooh, GREAT last line, Debs!! Congrats on your win. Aren't these fun to see?

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 10:59:00 AM
    Very nice Debbie!Congrats on the win.

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 10:31:00 AM
    Many congratulations on your number 1 oh cool lady xx

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 4:03:00 AM
    A powerful right Debbie. Congratulation on your win. Connie

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 11:53:00 PM
    No more shooting Debbie. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 11:07:00 PM
    Many congrats Debbie for this well deserved win

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 9:39:00 PM
    Debbie, Congratulations on your win in the contest! RAY

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 9:05:00 PM
    Debbie, Congratulations with your winning poem in Rix's "A "Gun"-o-ku " contest. Goodnight~ LINDA

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 9:00:00 PM
    This was a G R E A T haiku, Debbie! I felt like I was captured by a moment in a James Bond movie! Such a suspenseful juxtoposition!!! Wonderful work AS ALWAYS---luv, gwendolen

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 6:50:00 PM
    This is great poem to ponder while on the street.

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 12:08:00 PM
    I rather like the gun-o-kus, mostly because they can be read either way. Depending on whether the person is in favour of guns or no, and whether the gunner is a hero or villain. As in this case, where all possibilities are present. Nice job with the laser, a stroke of imagination.

  1. Date: 1/24/2013 6:32:00 PM
    Great Haiku... Tells an epic story and displays great talent.... Love ya much.... Jake

  1. Date: 1/23/2013 10:46:00 PM
    Very nice Debbie! Who knew Haiku can be so mysteriously dramatic - you've opened up the possibilities. Wow! Well done!

  1. Date: 1/23/2013 3:46:00 PM
    like this Debbie,, just watch for the cross fire...

  1. Date: 1/23/2013 10:44:00 AM
    Reminds me of the film Collateral starring Tom Cruise and Jamie Foxx. Great haiku.

  1. Date: 1/22/2013 12:34:00 PM
    Debbie you sound like an expert with laser lights and having a taxi waiting too. LOL. A great visual poem, I'm running a Vedic in my mine of Debbie escaping from the scene. LOL. Haiku Poems always surprises how with so little words, you can paint an entire picture. I need to write more of these. I think I've only written one. Warm Smiles Always, Connie

  1. Date: 1/22/2013 10:39:00 AM
    oh this is good are you on terrorist duty? xx (question is 10 the optimum syllables ?)

  1. Date: 1/22/2013 6:42:00 AM
    With the heightened discussions about gun control, this hits home! Hugs, Jack

  1. Date: 1/22/2013 4:52:00 AM
    Yes, even I was thinking of a Bond movie sequence reading this. a very well done haiku, Debbie.

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