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Sweet Seventeen

I knew that we liked each other,
Judging by that look held in your eyes.
My heart would've had no other,
The way you filled it up inside.

Was it really that complicated?
Just let me do what a man would.
If distance is why we couldn't date then,
I would've said that I understood.

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  1. Date: 2/14/2013 9:02:00 PM

    JH , Stopping by with sincere thanks for your kind comments. It is appreciated more than words or can say... Wishing you the best Valentine's Day YET! Always & Forever :-) LINDA .

  1. Date: 1/24/2013 11:52:00 AM

    This is so real, truthful and full of emotion. I love it. Life- and especially relationships with people- would be so much easier if we all learned how to make things less complicated and understandable! Things could be so simple ;) Very well done

  1. Date: 1/22/2013 1:03:00 PM

    You get more of your poems read if you click on the person's name who comments on your work and go to their poems and choose one on which to comment..Most people don't go back and read when you comment on your own poem in the reply section..I don't know if PS plans on fixing that where it will send an email to person that you have commented so that they can come back here..It is more for the next person who comes to comment..Sara

  1. Date: 1/22/2013 12:48:00 AM

    Seems like the fire still burns within you my friend. If she is available, then go after her, even in words from the heart. Thanks for comments made and stopping by. One love. Joy Wells

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 4:59:00 PM

    Sounds like you really liked her. Oh, to go back in time!!! I enjoyed this one.

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 1:07:00 PM

    Romance at first sight?..Sara

    Thomas Avatar JH Thomas Date: 1/21/2013 1:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    No. This is an old story from when i was eighteen and she was seventeen.