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  1. Date: 2/12/2013 2:08:00 PM
    very good mate ...a winner with me too... perhaps you should be a writer of novels ....great description here!

  1. Date: 2/12/2013 6:53:00 AM
    Very expressive and descriptive winning work..Enjoyed reading ...I could feel the cold ice coming into my lungs..Congrats...Sara

  1. Date: 2/7/2013 10:46:00 AM
    Hi David, back here again many , Congratulations on your winning "mixed up poem." Have yourself a nice day~ :-) xox~PD

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 4:11:00 PM
    Dear David, your poem has a beautiful entrance... and the ending has a perfect feeling... always~ TEX

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 10:33:00 AM
    Wow, your descriptions are oustanding!! Fantastic job, David! Congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 10:01:00 AM
    This is stunning! Fav. Congrats on your win, David. Just one of many favourite lines: "...the older ones had split open like a double breasted coat." - so very descriptive. Love, Su

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 8:27:00 AM
    Goosebumps here !! Spendid write !! I like the way your story line built to a climax...and love, love the climax. For yes...she is always listening. Congrats on your well deserved win.

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 3:47:00 AM
    Love it David and many congrats on your win xx

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 12:48:00 AM
    Beautiful piece,David.Great job.Congrats on your superb win in this contest.

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 12:33:00 AM
    context beautifully perceived...congrats on your win..

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 8:30:00 PM
    Lovely words David, very well done ....Seren

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 7:57:00 PM
    congrats on your win David

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 6:36:00 PM
    I'm a sucker for anything abouyt Mother Earth [shhhhhh] my only suggestion which still can be easily done is bring the prose into present tense with the haiku. Congrad's to you [and I so needed my tea ;) reading all these!] Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 4:58:00 PM
    This is a beauty! And Mother earth does listen to beautiful things! :) Congratulations, David!

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 4:27:00 PM
    Fantastic, congratulations!

  1. Date: 1/27/2013 7:08:00 PM
    Hola, David your poem makes me want to walk with my eyes close, in order to feel all the beautiful-ness your poem exposes. ((with a jacket of course LOL ))The calling and sound of the pecker took me back to them days when I enjoyed watching nature and the light. A wonderful image and await... Hope Mother is listening and changes all... enjoyed..PD

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 8:44:00 PM
    Amazing! Beautiful imagery in this, David...One for the Winners' List, I'd say. Thank you for reading my poem and your kind comment. Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 1/25/2013 9:59:00 PM
    David; I don't know if this is for a contest, or not, but it's really good. A lot of imagination. thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 1/24/2013 1:24:00 PM
    I couldn't agree with Henry more- this is quite visually absorbing!! You have a way with depicting beautiful images in my mind. I love this David :)

  1. Date: 1/24/2013 10:15:00 AM
    amazing poetry here David,, visually absorbing...............