Submit a Poem
Get Your Premium Membership
spacer

Oops, something happened to this poem. It is no longer here.

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
 
  1. Date: 2/12/2013 2:08:00 PM

    very good mate ...a winner with me too... perhaps you should be a writer of novels ....great description here!

  1. Date: 2/12/2013 6:53:00 AM

    Very expressive and descriptive winning work..Enjoyed reading ...I could feel the cold ice coming into my lungs..Congrats...Sara

  1. Date: 2/7/2013 10:46:00 AM

    Hi David, back here again many , Congratulations on your winning "mixed up poem." Have yourself a nice day~ :-) xox~PD

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 4:11:00 PM

    Dear David, your poem has a beautiful entrance... and the ending has a perfect feeling... always~ TEX

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 10:33:00 AM

    Wow, your descriptions are oustanding!! Fantastic job, David! Congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 10:01:00 AM

    This is stunning! Fav. Congrats on your win, David. Just one of many favourite lines: "...the older ones had split open like a double breasted coat." - so very descriptive. Love, Su

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 8:27:00 AM

    Goosebumps here !! Spendid write !! I like the way your story line built to a climax...and love, love the climax. For yes...she is always listening. Congrats on your well deserved win.

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 3:47:00 AM

    Love it David and many congrats on your win xx

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 12:48:00 AM

    Beautiful piece,David.Great job.Congrats on your superb win in this contest.

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 12:33:00 AM

    context beautifully perceived...congrats on your win..

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 8:30:00 PM

    Lovely words David, very well done ....Seren

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 7:57:00 PM

    congrats on your win David

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 6:36:00 PM

    I'm a sucker for anything abouyt Mother Earth [shhhhhh] my only suggestion which still can be easily done is bring the prose into present tense with the haiku. Congrad's to you [and I so needed my tea ;) reading all these!] Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 4:58:00 PM

    This is a beauty! And Mother earth does listen to beautiful things! :) Congratulations, David!

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 4:27:00 PM

    Fantastic, congratulations!

  1. Date: 1/27/2013 7:08:00 PM

    Hola, David your poem makes me want to walk with my eyes close, in order to feel all the beautiful-ness your poem exposes. ((with a jacket of course LOL ))The calling and sound of the pecker took me back to them days when I enjoyed watching nature and the light. A wonderful image and await... Hope Mother is listening and changes all... enjoyed..PD

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 8:44:00 PM

    Amazing! Beautiful imagery in this, David...One for the Winners' List, I'd say. Thank you for reading my poem and your kind comment. Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 1/25/2013 9:59:00 PM

    David; I don't know if this is for a contest, or not, but it's really good. A lot of imagination. thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 1/24/2013 1:24:00 PM

    I couldn't agree with Henry more- this is quite visually absorbing!! You have a way with depicting beautiful images in my mind. I love this David :)

  1. Date: 1/24/2013 10:15:00 AM

    amazing poetry here David,, visually absorbing...............

  1. Date: 1/22/2013 12:08:00 AM

    I tell you my friend, nature may well have done best without us. We done gone and killed off most of it's resources. We have become pairanhas to nature. "The not-wanted", so to speak. I like, a lot! Thanks for visiting and loving my write. One love my friend. Joy Wells

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 2:39:00 PM

    David Soup mail Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 1:09:00 PM

    Gave me a snowy chill here my friend... Im back up and writing after a small vacation from Soup... catching up the best I can... Hope your well and your better half are doing well... Michael

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 9:40:00 AM

    Loved it David, snow about to start here again in an hour, fed up with it now ...Seren

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 8:03:00 AM

    Beautifully described my friend! Understand you're getting more than your usual share of the white stuff this year! Welcome to the club! LOL

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 6:52:00 AM

    a cold wind blew ..echoed through the trees..the sound of silence.Just beautiful Dave..I love your style.

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 3:09:00 AM

    Wow, this is a perfect, and I mean perfect entry into Debbie's contest! This is tremendous my friend! I truly loved reading this amazing and enormous poem this morning! What a powerful piece, such an intriguing poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 3:08:00 AM

    and I doubt I need to say I love your work, it is evidently unique, I like how you managed to set the tone.

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 3:05:00 AM

    thank you david for your advice on my poem, no battle no glory. I would like for you to continue too advise on wich is the best category to choose for my poems as of yet i am a rookie and only have the gift of writing however you seem to be well equipped to help, and I am kindly obliged to ask assistance. thanx again, Naldeem

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 3:04:00 AM

    like this one David but it makes me feel even colder, hope you got your car dug out, my is getting deeper in by the minute. xx soup