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Misuse of Gun

dead bodies on 
ground...
he goes for a 
shooting spree
to appease himself



CONTEST:"A 'Gun'-o-
Ku" sponsored by 
Gwendolen Rix

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  1. Date: 2/26/2013 4:38:00 PM

    sad but true one. Congrats on your win, my friend.

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 10:37:00 AM

    Olusegun Congrats on your win!Very nice haiku.

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 10:29:00 AM

    Many congratulations on your number 1 Olusegun xx

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 11:49:00 PM

    Hair trigger tempers and hair triggers. Bad combination. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 11:06:00 PM

    Many congrats olusegun for this well deserved win

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 9:05:00 PM

    Olusegun, Congratulations with your winning poem in Rix's "A "Gun"-o-ku " contest. Goodnight~ LINDA

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 8:55:00 PM

    Olusegun...u got right into the head of a madman in your haiku...please read my lil blog regarding the contest results. Liked your juxto at the beginning....nice effect! Best to u always, gwendolen

  1. Date: 1/27/2013 5:19:00 PM

    Did you mean shooting spree? that is how it seems to me. yes, a very good example of misuse!!

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 6:28:00 PM

    Very nice! Good luck in the contest, Olusegun! Ruben.

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 4:34:00 PM

    Too much misuse of guns Olu, thanks for sharing this and thank you for all your kind visits, much appreciated xxx