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White Noise

Fierce white noise fills my pained head Extreme barbaric measure What has happened to my mind No song left to sing Time elapsed from loud noises The orb delivers bright light Too bright to see very clear Piercing to my soul I’m closed, never to rise up My blind mind sears from the heat Never saw what was coming Bashing of the noise Tears flow down with fire trailing Pain fills every part of me And I die with every breath With no life to live White hot is the strength of noise Bleaching my mind beyond hope I won’t see clearly again May time heal my mind
Russell Sivey

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  1. Date: 1/21/2013 8:07:00 AM

    I am sooo impressed, my friend! This is an extremely well written poem...kudos! You write poetry... I write silly stuff. I can only hope to write as creatively as you! Cheers, Jack

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 12:21:00 AM

    great write Russell..as always captivating the imagination...well, just wanted to say that my last poem on winter is an entry for Francine's contest, I love the winter too and my family think I am strange, the autumn also fascinates me, but sadly even though I been to places all over europe I have missed the snow, so that is one thing I long to see and touch...

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 7:36:00 PM

    All that noise will be captured by His opened Hand. In one whoop. Descriptive write, Russell! Peace!

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 6:11:00 PM

    Intense and passionate feelings, a side of you I haven't seen before, usually I picture you like a calm flowing river, you have so many sides to you, they are all up for admiration, don't lose that smile my friend, xxxx

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 4:05:00 PM

    Wow Russell, I can sense the emotion of despair, sadness in this poem. Very deep, intense. Wishing you a wonderful day. Hugs and luv, Gail