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Stand Together, Hallelujah

 This was written to the tune of Leonard Cohen's Hallelujah...  
A beautiful cover by Jeff Buckley: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WIF4_Sm-rgQ
Leonard Cohen did seven stanzas...  all the covers I've heard do only five.


Stand Together, Hallelujah  

What’s wrong with our society
When people are afraid to speak 
Unless they’re somehow trying to out-do you
We fight against a hidden war
While evil’s knocking at our door!
And nobody remembers Hallelujah

Hallelujah, Hallelujah  
Hallelujah, Hallelujah  

When standing for the innocent
Is labeled as “intolerant” 
It sounds like you have let somebody fool you
Come on now people, can’t you see?
What do you want this world to be?
We’ve got to have a dream, let’s Hallelujah! 

Hallelujah, Hallelujah  
Hallelujah, Hallelujah  

So, why do people have to be
So damned correct, politically?
And take offense with never having knew you
What kind of battle do we fight
In fruitless effort to be right?
We fall apart without our Hallelujah!

Hallelujah, Hallelujah  
Hallelujah, Hallelujah  

It’s really just hypocrisy 
To say you’re fighting to be free
But you don’t let the freedom speak, now do you?  
You point your finger at a crowd!
Your need to turn that hand around! 
And shout a universal Hallelujah!

Hallelujah, Hallelujah  
Hallelujah, Hallelujah  

To judge someone and force your rules 
Makes everyone a bunch of fools
If people don’t agree then, what’s it to you?
We all have hidden fears, no doubt!
But fears can’t make it all about
The things that cause us not to Hallelujah!

Hallelujah, Hallelujah  
Hallelujah, Hallelujah  

Intolerance can turn to hate 
But what we choose to tolerate
It’s like insanity has gotten to you
So if we want to take a stand 
Against the evil plot of man
Why can’t we take up arms and Hallelujah?

Hallelujah, Hallelujah  
Hallelujah, Hallelujah  

So go ahead against the grain
To try to stimulate a brain 
But choose your battles wisely, draw them to you  
There’s only one law to obey!
It’s “LOVE EACH OTHER” as they say! 
Let’s stand together, shouting Hallelujah!!

Hallelujah, Hallelujah  
Hallelujah, Hallelujah  

1/20/2013 ~ Written for Frank's Hallelujah contest. For more insight on the words I wrote, you can click on About This Poem above the title. 

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  1. Date: 4/6/2013 7:27:00 AM

    Considering that you erased all your poes a short while ago you have written a lot of poems. The quality of your work has been exceptional.

  1. Date: 3/31/2013 11:14:00 AM

    WOW! Becca, so glad I clicked on this poem today. This is truly outstanding and is going in my favorites! You pulled at my heart and made it sing. You my friend are so very talented and a blessing to us all. Hugs

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 10:26:00 PM

    simple and stimulating is this one my friend, Congrats on the superb win:) Jag

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 8:40:00 PM

    It seems I have good taste in poems, enjoyed reading your winning poem again.

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 5:28:00 PM

    congrats on your win Becca

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 5:22:00 PM

    Congrats on your win, Becca, mine did not make it into the list, may be it did not do well in the matter of rhythm!! Jag

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 3:43:00 PM

    Excellently done! After just reading the first verse, it was so well done, I gasped, it took my breath. Congratulations, Becca, on your win in Frank's contest. love and hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 12:19:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win, Becca.

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 11:08:00 AM

    A very beautiful lyrics/poem you've penned my dear Becca! I love it! You really did it well. Big congrats on your awesome win! love/hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 9:30:00 AM

    Beca.. Congrats!!! :-) on your winning poem. *Always~PD

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 9:11:00 AM

    Such a powerful message, and wonderful winning poem, Becca. Excellent lyrics!!

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 8:53:00 AM

    This reader is glad you re-entered, otherwise I would probably have missed these well written verses. Our themes were kind of the same, but WOW...Love Love Love this !! Congrats on your win and thank you for re-entering !!

  1. Date: 2/3/2013 9:36:00 AM

    wow!!! fantastic poem of yours friend Becca ;) I like it...Good luck in the contest. Have a nice day always! Gus, Maria

  1. Date: 2/2/2013 3:45:00 PM

    wow Becca, this is so inspirational, in fact come through so sincere, this could really help to put the world to right...

  1. Date: 1/27/2013 4:42:00 PM

    just seeing this one again. it's next on my to do list. WIsh I had a theme as outstanding as yours in my mind.

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 8:53:00 AM

    wow!! fantastic write friend Becca.. I like it :) good luck in the contest. thanks for stopping by. Hugs, Maria

  1. Date: 1/22/2013 1:44:00 PM

    WOW. This is fantastic. It made me want to stand up and start shouting "Hallelujah!" Not sure how my co-workers would have reacted to that :)

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 6:47:00 PM

    Another great write!! Keep it up! Jim

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 3:59:00 PM

    Well Frank's getting alot of of good ones for me this is among the best so far..Thanks for stopping by my writes! Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 8:27:00 AM

    A very inspirational piece... a keeper! The Soup needs your creativity! Hugs, Jack xox

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 6:12:00 AM

    This is the best one I've read for the contest, should be number one for all to see, goes in my book of fav, a very strong message is sent, I hope to see it go platinum, alongside your beautiful heart. I am so glad you arrived on soup, you make such a good difference, sending you love and peace my friend always, xxx

    Lucas Avatar Becca Lucas Date: 1/21/2013 7:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Wow, thank you!! Thanks for reading it (it's so long)... and I'm really glad you like it.
  1. Date: 1/20/2013 9:14:00 PM

    wow,you did an amazing job with this song's tune. I sure hope to be able to try this contest. Frank is going to be WOWED by your entry, Becca. And thanks so much for what you said on my poem.Luv , andrea

    Lucas Avatar Becca Lucas Date: 1/21/2013 7:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Andrea!
  1. Date: 1/20/2013 4:23:00 PM

    Hi Becca you are filling up my favorite poems. You are amazing thoughtful and Articulate, an unbeatable combination of gifts.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 1/21/2013 4:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You make me smile once again. :0)
    Lucas Avatar Becca Lucas Date: 1/21/2013 7:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Rick! That means a lot, to hear that coming from someone so talented. Trust me, you fill my favorites list too!
  1. Date: 1/20/2013 2:29:00 PM

    Great message here, Becca. You strike a chord every time you wield your pen. Love it!... Su

    Lucas Avatar Becca Lucas Date: 1/21/2013 7:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :) Thanks Su!
  1. Date: 1/20/2013 1:53:00 PM

    A cool rendition of the lyrics, Becca -- your version leans towards a John Lennon-esque feel (for me anyway)....a 60's/70's protest song. "It’s really just hypocrisy/ To say you’re fighting to be free/ But you don’t let the freedom speak, now do you?" -- those are high-impact lines. Best wishes in Frank's contest!

    Lucas Avatar Becca Lucas Date: 1/20/2013 2:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Chris! That means a lot to me, to hear that!
  1. Date: 1/20/2013 1:51:00 PM

    Enjoyed reading your work this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

    Lucas Avatar Becca Lucas Date: 1/21/2013 7:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Sara :)