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POETRY Response

(This is in response to the Poem
POETRY written by Richard Lamoureux)

I make the most sound but no noise
You'll hear me alright sans my voice.

Richard, look in my face there's no smile
But I won you over standing away many a mile.

Don't I tug at your heart though we haven't met?
You haven't seen any of my magic tricks yet!

Equally at home in a palace or a shanty shack
I have everything I need, nothing more I lack.

Oh, I do fall in; and ya, often fall out of love,
But I am not a cheat, I guess, by Jove!

But here's where we fall apart
A famous person is but a spoiled brat!

What I write, I do not retract or rewrite,
I get called out often, but I know I'm right.

But on one matter you and I do agree
The power of poetry do sets our spirits free!

So here is a poetic challenge for you, Mr. Lamoureux
Pick any of my poems to respond and make me fret or vex!!



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  1. Date: 1/23/2013 4:17:00 PM

    don't ask me to join in like you did Debs here. hahahaha. (It would take me forever, and I am probably going to be watching tv!)

  1. Date: 1/23/2013 4:16:00 PM

    hey, this is AWESOME and now I think I need to see which poem of his you were responding too. Did you grow up with English? You have excellent use of it!! It's great to have you for a friend at Soup.

  1. Date: 1/23/2013 9:25:00 AM

    Ut oh..are you two dueling? I used to fence you know? But I was a Berserker, scared the pants out of the enemy but once the surprise was over I usually died LOL..[of course we were well padded!] Light & Love

    Malik Avatar Abdul Malik Date: 1/23/2013 3:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You wanna join in? Threesome will be whole lot of fun! You write a subject from one angle of view, I see it in a totally different perspective. But it has to be taken in a very good spirit. And well, you are a pro! So, it will be a cake walk for you!
  1. Date: 1/22/2013 7:00:00 PM

    Enjoyed your poetry tonight Malik, and it's great that Richard was upto the challenge. xxx

    Malik Avatar Abdul Malik Date: 1/23/2013 3:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks a lot.
  1. Date: 1/21/2013 4:02:00 PM

    Thanks Malik, you gave me good material to work with. I enjoyed your poem very much. This adds a whole new layer of fun to the writing.

    Malik Avatar Abdul Malik Date: 1/23/2013 3:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Any time. If we take it in good spirit, it's lot of fun. Maybe, until next time!!
  1. Date: 1/21/2013 9:53:00 AM

    see "Response to Poetry Response" Have a great day Malik.

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 11:02:00 AM

    I hope this is for all to read, I already have. I like it is very interesting. Poetry does set our spirits free. God Bless you both. Lucilla

    Malik Avatar Abdul Malik Date: 1/21/2013 4:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks a lot.
  1. Date: 1/20/2013 9:51:00 AM

    Hey Abdul, chalenge accepted and met. This could get interesting. I enjoy people with spirit, you my friend qualify.

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 8:59:00 AM

    Sounds good my friend.