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This Night

This night is a dancer
In a dark, velvet dress
This night is a singer
With a deep, rich voice
We are sitting, we are silent
And suddenly, we remember 
Something and start talking
The window is opened
We are watching a small cloud
Floating beside the Moon
We are watching the stars
And their light is reflected
In our eyes, the light made of
Many, many millions of years

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  1. Date: 1/25/2013 6:33:00 AM

    Philosophically romantic, I like it, Vesna :) Jag

  1. Date: 1/22/2013 11:15:00 AM

    Very beautiful... Terry

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 9:20:00 PM

    what an interesting poem, reflecting on spending a night with someone. Starting off one way and ending another way. I quite like it.

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 7:31:00 AM

    Vesna a great romantic write...David

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 6:17:00 AM

    You describe a lovely night, Vesna - A very nice poem to read. - - Have a nice Sunday .... - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 5:53:00 AM

    ‡ Love It. ˜ I Always Have Enjoyed Metaphors, Sweet Beautiful Vesna ˜ I Find Depth As Richness In Colours Lovely Here, In This Fascinating And Beautiful Painting ˜ 'The Night Is A Dancer, In A Dark, Velvet Dress.' ˜ Yesss She Is, And Sooo Very Beautiful! ˜ Thank You Precious Lovely Vesna, For Your Endless Beauty's Kind Visit ˜ Good To Behold Your Treasures Once More And Have A Love Lightened As Beautiful Day ˜ My Love, Always, Rachel *