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Flower Petals in the Wind

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Flower Petals in the Wind

Though it seems like petals fell by the wind But actually the flower pushed them out One by one they would fall from the flower But somehow the wind seemed to know no doubt Soon as the petals came loose the wind blew Carried them far in the air, so privileged But the flower held firm to those last few It wasn’t letting the wind gain leverage But as the petals came loose, and wind blows Petals would dance a special loving dance Sometimes two would intertwine twice as strong Flowing was second nature like a trance Powers of the flower outweigh the wind But the petals when free get a joy ride No matter the petal, wind will get you Free to flow down, nature you must abide
Russell Sivey Entrant into Gail Angel Doyle's "Petals In The Wind" contest 1/19/2013

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  1. Date: 2/5/2013 3:44:00 AM

    Congrats Russel on a big win to you!

  1. Date: 2/3/2013 9:43:00 PM

    Many many congrats for this win dear Russell.

  1. Date: 2/3/2013 6:40:00 PM

    'big congrats to you in this contest, Russell . A great spot at the top!

  1. Date: 2/3/2013 12:56:00 PM

    Congratulations on your winning spot Russell well deserved xx

  1. Date: 2/3/2013 2:54:00 AM

    This is really an extremely beautiful masterpiece! I love it and has enjoyed reading it! My biggest congratulations on your well-deserved super win my dear friend, Russell! Thank you so much for sharing! I'll include this as one of my favs. Again, thank you so much and have a great day! love/hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 2/2/2013 6:49:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win!! :)

  1. Date: 2/1/2013 9:03:00 AM

    Lovely ride this poem has taken me on! Congratulations to you, Russell!!

  1. Date: 2/1/2013 8:28:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win !! Excellent poem on Petals in the wind !! What a ride that would be !!

  1. Date: 2/1/2013 7:58:00 AM

    congratulations!a very beautiful poem.

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 8:57:00 PM

    Dear Russell, a beautiful image. I love the flowers pushing out the old. I call it healing at the end. I see why your poem is on the number one spot. I have fallen in love with the way you gave life to the wind in your poem. Congratulations with this lovely dance in which plays in slow motion against the wind. Everything falls and subsides on natures ground. Lovely~ LINDA

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 8:42:00 PM

    Congratulations, there's nothing quite so free as a petal in the wind.

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 6:15:00 PM

    Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 4:31:00 PM

    Congrats on your first place win! A very charming tale.

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 3:42:00 PM

    Congrats on your winning work..Enjoyed reading this one..Sara

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 3:40:00 PM

    Congrats on your win. Yes with nature you have to abide. Great poem, my friend. Images easily forms in one's mind while reading your write. Warm Smiles Always, Connie

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 2:38:00 PM

    Wonderful write Russell , congrats...

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 2:38:00 PM

    Congratulations, Russell. Su

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 1:40:00 PM

    Way to go Russell, excellent first place win!

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 12:50:00 PM

    Big Congratulations Dear Russell!! Well done!!! Big hugs. Deb

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 12:09:00 PM

    Congrats Russell on your big win, love to see your name at the top, great poetry here, you should be proud xxx

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 11:28:00 AM

    Russell, congratulations on your first place in my contest Petals In The Wind. Your poem is beautiful. Hugs and luv, Gail

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 12:34:00 PM

    Really nice poem about "flower power" Russell

  1. Date: 1/19/2013 8:51:00 PM

    I think you did a really good job with this theme, Russell. Very beautiful.

  1. Date: 1/19/2013 5:10:00 PM

    Creative work for Gail's contest..Winners' list for sure in my book..Enjoyed reading ..I wonder what it feels like to be a flower's petal and be carried by the wind far away from the mother plant?...Thanks for stopping by..In my work, "Boredom Flew", I was trying to do da dum or unstressed/stressed meter plus the rhyme and my brain got tired..Ha!!Sara