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My Fantasy Dream

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My Fantasy Dream

                                   
                                 A Dream From My Past 
                                     Was A FANTASY.
                           Be patient I will take you where I 
                              have been from the beginning.
                           One of those days was a lucky day 
                         When I heard a light tap on my Door
                                 Who is it I asked? 
                                 Its me the post man. 
                          Oh dear I was murmuring what could it be? 
             Step by step with my cane I arrived to open with shaky hands 
             a young man with a smiling face was standing with an envelope 
                 in his hand ready to give it to me but I had to sign it first 
         staring at him crying for help to stay as maybe it could be 
                                       bad news or good news.
              I opened it and In there was a cheque of one million dollars
                                I screamed young man I won 
                                 the lottery I am a winner 
             yesterday I bought a ticket with my last 2 dollars thank you 
              please come back tomorrow I have a small surprise for you.
 My cry of happiness was heard by the drops of rain knocking on my window                                                                                              calling to ask when I am due to cache the money as they also were my friends     awaiting for the happy event to the never ending journey of giving.
                                My fantasy dream was fulfilled 
                               Oh! how good is The Lord to me.
 Now that I won I ran sat down got out my pen and paper and here I am 
writing today I am rich but tomorrow I will become poor as I will give away 
all the millions to the needy my family my friends everybody will share 
                                        my richness. 
      Good night my friends until tomorrow another day another dream.  

                                        Therese Bacha 
                                          10/5/2013


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  1. Date: 3/28/2013 8:40:00 AM
    I loved this poem, very nice and enjoyed it alot. It made me wonder about that postman for a mnute LOL well done.

  1. Date: 2/22/2013 5:56:00 PM
    what a very nice dream. Hmmm, i thought you were gonna have a party with that young postman!!! Then you could enter it into the spicy poetry contest. This was a very fun one of yours to read. I really liked it, my friend.

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 2/22/2013 6:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hellooo, busy busy reading poems? good for you..thank you Andrea, see you later...Love Terry xoxoxoxo
  1. Date: 1/28/2013 10:40:00 PM
    This was a good dream winning ,,,, I haven't seen you in a while it feels like. I so love reading your words/ poems ;} thank you for reading my "from Him" it was 1997, first six months we were together, 17 years with him, Yes I'm very OK now. I'm lonely though. Gotta find another man ,,, God Bless you Terry .

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 1/29/2013 7:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Such a beautiful woman like you should not find it hard to have someone, he must be a very lucky man to be with you..Where do you live Debbie.....I live in Canada Montreal.....have a nice day.Love Terry xoxo
  1. Date: 1/22/2013 8:46:00 PM
    can I be your friend? I enjoyed your poem Terry! Warm thoughts, Ralph

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 1/22/2013 8:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I noticed you haven't been writing? in 2013...take care xoxo Terry
    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 1/22/2013 8:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Of course Ralph you are a friend...thank you so much....warm thoughts to you to....xooxox Have a nice evening..Terry
  1. Date: 1/22/2013 12:12:00 AM
    yep, this would be a fantasy come TRUE, wouldn't it? You are a lovely dreamer. by the way, I am 57 but thanks for your comment. I like to think I look a lot younger than that too!

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 1/22/2013 6:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Andrea...have a wonderful day...Terry
  1. Date: 1/21/2013 10:15:00 PM
    Is it true? Remember that Im your friend! LOL! You're funny, Therese!

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 1/21/2013 11:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Trust me i would remember all the poet here that i have come to know. You are funny too, thank you , you made em laugh. Terry
  1. Date: 1/21/2013 10:32:00 AM
    your poem so vivid, one was in there, enjoying every second of your win...really like this

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 1/21/2013 10:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Harry so much by stopping by,,,Have a nice day. xoxo Terry
  1. Date: 1/21/2013 9:05:00 AM
    Wow, this is a stunner for sure. Your writing always pulls me right in and keeps me so engaged, it is always a great pleasure for me to stop by on your work! I will also be giving you a 7 rating :)

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 1/21/2013 9:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    My dearest Anne, thank you so much ,,, have a beautiful day wherever you are. I really enjoy reading your poems,,,love Terry
  1. Date: 1/20/2013 9:27:00 PM
    What a lovely fantasy that was!!! :) Therese...you are so sweet and kind in all your posts on my poems...I do wish you every good blessing...monetary or otherwise! :) HUGS HUGS HUGS!

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 1/20/2013 10:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you ,,,,,Eileen i read your last poem, i hope your daughter has a safe trip,,, and if you need anything,,,,i am here for you,,,,Love Terry
  1. Date: 1/20/2013 2:43:00 PM
    WOW! What a fantasy. So it is not real - you didn't win the Million, How I wish you had. I'm still your friend , with, or without money. Good luck in the contest. Lucilla

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 1/20/2013 4:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You are so cute,,you are my friend with or without the million,,,,,hope you had a wonderful weekend..love Terry
  1. Date: 1/20/2013 1:47:00 PM
    Thanks for stopping by..Good to know that your son survived stage four cancer..Many do not..Sara

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 1/20/2013 2:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Sara,,,it is a Blessing i know that God is with him. xoxo Terry
  1. Date: 1/20/2013 8:22:00 AM
    Therese a great entree for the contest, good luck...David

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 1/20/2013 11:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you David,,,, have a nice Sunday.xoxo Terry
  1. Date: 1/20/2013 7:47:00 AM
    if only hey , lovely fantasy I am sure shared by many xx

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 1/20/2013 11:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you,,i felt good when i wrote it,,,,it a fantasy......xoxo Terry
  1. Date: 1/20/2013 7:12:00 AM
    It would have been a very, very pleasant experience ..... but we can only dream of such a day. - Good written my friend. - Luck in contest. - - Have a fine Sunday .... - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 1/20/2013 11:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Anne,your smiling face is always a welcome,,,,Love Terry
  1. Date: 1/20/2013 5:58:00 AM
    Very nice poem, Terry, though a bit shattering at the end... glad to see from the ccomments below that your son is a survivor! In that sence, it seems that you have already won something far better than the lottery! Terry

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 1/20/2013 11:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I changed the end as you were right,, as for my son thank you he is a miracle boy,,,,God was great,,, xoxo Terry
  1. Date: 1/20/2013 3:41:00 AM
    Thank you for your comment Terry!:D You have wonderful poems! Husna

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 1/20/2013 11:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Husna,,thank you so much,,,i will go now and visit your poems,xoxo Terry
  1. Date: 1/19/2013 4:34:00 PM
    Reads like a winner...Enjoyed reading today..At least we can have our dreams..I am sorry to hear about your son with the cancer..I am not sure that I understood correctly..Did he have chemo and is now a surviver?..Thanks for the stops by my work..Your kind reviews are encouraging..Sara

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 1/19/2013 7:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Sara, my son had the cancer 5 years ago,chemo for 5 months as he was stage 4, and thank God he is a survival, thank you so much for your concern, and your feelings. I hope we all win the lottery one day, it would be fun,,Love Terry xoxoxo see you tomorrow...
  1. Date: 1/19/2013 1:28:00 PM
    One highly commendable dream. Light & Love

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 1/19/2013 1:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Debbie, hope to win the Fantasy contest. Have a nice weekend. Love Terry