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Guns

reared on six shooters
pretending dead act again...
real life a dead cert.

© Harry J Horsman 2013  

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  1. Date: 2/26/2013 4:35:00 PM

    Congratulations to you, Harry. Yep, it is dead certain!!

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 10:33:00 AM

    Love this Harry.Congrats on your win in the contest.

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 10:15:00 AM

    many congratulations on your no 1 harry xx

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 4:00:00 AM

    Congratulation Harry an excellent Haiku. Connie

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 11:05:00 PM

    Many congrats Harry for this well deserved win

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 9:47:00 PM

    Harry, Every time the gun deal comes up, I think of playing when we were kids, "Bang" you're dead"! All those westerns on tv. Somehow I think that helped train our generation in the proper respect of firearms! There's a difference in play and real life! Nice point you made here! RAY

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 9:03:00 PM

    Harry, Congratulations with your winning poem in Rix's "A "Gun"-o-ku " contest. Goodnight~ LINDA

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 8:14:00 PM

    Harry! Howdy partner! hahah....Appreciated your entry in my gun o ku contest! Congrats for a marvelous haiku!! gwendolen

  1. Date: 1/24/2013 1:56:00 PM

    Mans ideas to reality to death. A Haiku more powerful than the gun, why? because it makes sense. Fine piece Harry :)

  1. Date: 1/22/2013 6:13:00 AM

    Truth? Clever Haiku! Good luck in the contest...

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 1:55:00 PM

    Short but meaningful.

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 7:26:00 AM

    Harry, if this is for the contest.the best of luck.. guns, is not the best subject for me.. I think they are the end of me. I'm glad no one in my near family owns one... xox~pd

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 5:50:00 AM

    well that last line cuts to the chase xx

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 4:50:00 AM

    nice write Harry...best wishes

  1. Date: 1/19/2013 8:22:00 PM

    I read Debs comment below. yes, that old sonny and cher song comes to mind on seeing this one!! playing cowboys and indians! (though this runs much deeper)

  1. Date: 1/19/2013 1:53:00 PM

    the child/fell to the floor--a pop-gun sounds...Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/19/2013 12:15:00 PM

    Best of luck in the contest, Harry! Ruben.

  1. Date: 1/19/2013 11:28:00 AM

    good haiku !!

  1. Date: 1/19/2013 11:27:00 AM

    Weapons scares me. - Well written, Harry - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)