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Haiku 1

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Haiku 1

Bamboo dappled light
Moss path down from the grove
Headstones lean and fall

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  1. Date: 11/2/2013 11:52:00 PM

    hello Jack.:-) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the HOME PAGE.... always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 8/16/2013 6:09:00 PM

    Deep, Jack.... reads like a forgotten graveyard... sad imagery... Linda

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 8/16/2013 6:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Actually, it was far more beautiful than sad. It's just me, I know, but cemeteries aren't sad places to me for the most part. As a child I spent many Sundays at my father's grave with my mother, and learned to drive (in the cemetery) while she visited my dad.
  1. Date: 4/21/2013 8:24:00 PM

    Love the haiku, glad you liked my caturday haiku's,,,, you have a great day

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 4/21/2013 9:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks! You too... Jack
  1. Date: 1/20/2013 8:30:00 AM

    Jack, a great image...welcome..David

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 1/20/2013 9:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for the comment and the welcome. I'm beginning to fel at home. Jack
  1. Date: 1/19/2013 11:35:00 AM

    Nicely written,Jack !!!! - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 1/19/2013 4:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks! I appreciate the comment. I hope you have a fine weekend too.
  1. Date: 1/19/2013 10:31:00 AM

    Great imagery in your haiku, Jack. Love, Kim

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 1/19/2013 4:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you. I appreciate the comment. Jack
  1. Date: 1/19/2013 10:09:00 AM

    I so dislike seeing headstones fallen or leaning askew in old parts of a cemetary. Souls long forgotten... enjoyed your poem.

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 1/19/2013 4:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for the comment. I too feel sadness in old cemeteries, especially those stones marking babies and children who died much too young. Jack