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Haiku 1

Bamboo dappled light
Moss path down from the grove
Headstones lean and fall

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  1. Date: 4/21/2013 8:24:00 PM

    Love the haiku, glad you liked my caturday haiku's,,,, you have a great day

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 4/21/2013 9:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks! You too... Jack
  1. Date: 1/20/2013 8:30:00 AM

    Jack, a great image...welcome..David

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 1/20/2013 9:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for the comment and the welcome. I'm beginning to fel at home. Jack
  1. Date: 1/19/2013 11:35:00 AM

    Nicely written,Jack !!!! - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 1/19/2013 4:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks! I appreciate the comment. I hope you have a fine weekend too.
  1. Date: 1/19/2013 10:31:00 AM

    Great imagery in your haiku, Jack. Love, Kim

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 1/19/2013 4:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you. I appreciate the comment. Jack
  1. Date: 1/19/2013 10:09:00 AM

    I so dislike seeing headstones fallen or leaning askew in old parts of a cemetary. Souls long forgotten... enjoyed your poem.

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 1/19/2013 4:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for the comment. I too feel sadness in old cemeteries, especially those stones marking babies and children who died much too young. Jack