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  1. Date: 8/9/2013 7:54:00 PM
    well done.....SKAT

  1. Date: 8/8/2013 10:07:00 PM
    nice win ruben...PD

  1. Date: 8/8/2013 8:31:00 PM
    thanks for the entry

  1. Date: 7/28/2013 10:16:00 PM
    Wonderful words! Laura :)

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 1:07:00 PM
    Hullo, Ruben. How are you doing?

  1. Date: 4/8/2013 6:34:00 PM

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 8:34:00 AM
    My hearty congratulations on your awesome poem and win my dear friend Ruben! A great write indeed! Thank you so much for sharing! love/hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 12:51:00 AM
    Congrats on the win with this cute and smart write:) Jag

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 7:58:00 PM
    Hi Ruben , :-) congratulations with your sweet and spicy win in Cyndi's out of the box" SENSUAL POETRY. ADULTS ONLY." Contest* Always & Forever ~LINDA

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 6:18:00 PM
    Killer ending here Mr. O and here's a man who knows the meaning of nuance ;) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 5:57:00 PM
    Awe... very lovely and sensual poem, Ruben. loved it. Congratulations on your win in Cyndi's contest. Hugs, catie :)

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 3:38:00 PM
    Sensual and errotic...but in very good taste !!! Thanks for dropping by my win and Congrats on yours !! Excellent !!

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 2:24:00 PM
    an intriguing and unusual piece, clever first and last lines, congrats on your win! :)

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 8:21:00 AM
    I really like this one Ruben, one of my favs here.

  1. Date: 2/13/2013 2:57:00 PM
    Hmm, Hmm, hmm...I haven't read you in a while and when I finally do, the first one I choose to read is this one, Ruben! Romantic and brilliant...Thanks for reading my poem. Good to see some of my favs still here. Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 4:14:00 PM
    And YES....erotica it was......!!! No doubt about it with those 6th & 7th lines especially..!! about blushing...... but of course, the Contest title "9".....would lead a person there! LOL.!!! I won't mention another number that corresponds...(it's hot in here) also had me thinking perhaps this relationship ying/yang....were on opposite planets so to speak! (Oh gads...I have definitely made it more complicated than I needed??? Perhaps?? LOL......

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 1:42:00 PM
    I am reading this (as Chris said)..perhaps with unintended meanings..(the picture it puts in my head)..however just as the title says, it is all in the perception..That being said, is what your poems are all about. I love the bit of mystery and metaphor used in your poetry, leaving more for the rest of us to ponder, each in our own way( carried away....didn't mean to make more than you intended..however that is why you are one of my favorite poets... always giving us food for thought.

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 7:02:00 PM
    Breath-taking!!!;) well done Ruben!!well done. I've had to read it several times. :) big hugs deb

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 1:10:00 PM
    I enjoyed reading this poem of yours very much, Ruben...very good!

  1. Date: 1/27/2013 12:46:00 PM
    What poem where is dedicated to me Mr. O? have you been naughty? ;)