On Thin Ice by Anne Lise Andresen

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 4/19/2013 6:12:00 PM

lol, I've been in this position before, good poem about ice Anne Lise!

Anne Lise Andresen Date: 4/20/2013 1:32:00 AM

Highly appreciate your visit and your comments, Sheri. Thank you! - - oxox / / Anne-Lise:

Gail DeBole

Date: 1/30/2013 7:02:00 AM

Hi Anne Lise - I can relate to this, and can sense the embarrassment you felt and self-control you displayed when this happened to you. I joined the falling down club a long time ago. Once again, you have written an emotionally honest poem. - Much love, Gail

Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/30/2013 10:01:00 AM

Highly appreciate your visit and your comments, Gail. Thank you! - - oxox / / Anne-Lise:

bl devnath

Date: 1/23/2013 10:29:00 AM

Lovely imagination penned quite nice. Loved always, my sweet friend, bl

Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/23/2013 10:31:00 AM

Highly appreciate your visit and your comments, bl. Thank you! - - oxox / / Anne-Lise:

Date: 1/22/2013 10:28:00 AM

hahahaha..I picture myself before in your poem my dear friend Ann Lise (^__^). first time to do the ice skating and Its really hurt my butt for days..great poem from a great poet like you :) Hugs, Maria

Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/22/2013 11:56:00 AM

Yes, it is painful to sit on your butt after a fall on the ice for days Maria. - Highly appreciate your visit and your comments. Thank you! - - oxox / / Anne-Lise:

Joseph May

Date: 1/22/2013 9:50:00 AM

nice write Anne...were you skating at the time?

Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/22/2013 11:53:00 AM

No this is when the streets are full of ice in winter time Joseph. - Thanks for your comments and your visit. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Leonora Galinta

Date: 1/22/2013 8:17:00 AM

This is an excellent poem with an excellent image, too my dear friend Anne-Lise. Reading it gives me a great and wonderful vicarious experience on ice. Hope I can have a first hand experience someday. It's so fun I'm sure. Thank you so much for sharing and your wonderful comments on my latest poem! Have a blessed day to you and your family always! love and hugs, Leonora

Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/22/2013 11:49:00 AM

Highly appreciate your visit and your comments, Leonora. Thank you! - - oxox / / Anne-Lise:

Ruben O.

Date: 1/21/2013 5:58:00 PM

: ) Dont worry...nobody saw you! Good one, Anne Lise! Ruben.

Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/22/2013 1:57:00 AM

Thanks for your comments and your visit, Ruben. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/21/2013 3:20:00 PM

Ut oh..you fell down? Thanks so much for stopping by my writes. Light & Love

Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/22/2013 1:56:00 AM

- Highly appreciate your visit and your comments, Debbie. Thank you! - - oxox / / Anne-Lise:

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 1/21/2013 12:57:00 PM

So nice to return and grab a smile from your work as always... Be patient with me it will take some time to catch up... hugs n luv Michael

Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/21/2013 1:04:00 PM

Take the time you need ....... :) Thanks for your comments and your visit, Michael. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

The Situation

Date: 1/21/2013 11:43:00 AM

The worries that women have.

Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/21/2013 11:46:00 AM

Maybe it is a "woman thing" ........ men do not care (?) Thanks for your comments and your visit, T.S.. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 1/21/2013 11:31:00 AM

Had me chuckling because once I took a fall on a busy street and the contents of my purse flew all over. Many people stopped and I quickly got us as fast as I could and wondered if my butt was wet from the snow. It is natural to get up right away so thank goodness nothing was broken. Nicely done. love phyl

Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/21/2013 11:35:00 AM

As an adult, it's so embarrassing...... Thanks for your comments and your visit, Phyllis. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Jack Ellison

Date: 1/21/2013 10:49:00 AM

Absolutely charming! For the first 10 or 12 years of my life, I practically lived on skates... I miss those carefree days! Loved your poem... hugs and much love! xox

Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/21/2013 11:01:00 AM

Thanks for your comments and your visit, Jack. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

SCRIBE ML

Date: 1/21/2013 9:02:00 AM

I'm trying to think of something cool you can do, on the way down, to make it look like you meant to do that.. : ) Good write Soup Angel!

Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/21/2013 10:43:00 AM

Thanks for your comments and your visit, Marlon. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Amii James

Date: 1/21/2013 4:40:00 AM

Really liked this, it's so funny and creative. And it really captures the essence of winter time:) xxxxx

Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/21/2013 10:43:00 AM

Thanks for your comments and your visit, Amii. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Ghali

Date: 1/20/2013 1:06:00 PM

Love the repetition of those lines....really shows the depth of concern for being seen at your worst by others! You made me smile! Great before I go to bed! Hugs! :)

Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/20/2013 1:08:00 PM

Good night and thanks for your comments and your visit, Eileen. - oxox / / Anne-Lise

yasmin khan

Date: 1/20/2013 12:54:00 PM

aw...you are so funny Anna...come on, did you really slip and wet your B...sorry if you did, don't like the thought of you hurting yourself,..its a nice poem Anna, have a rocking weekend..but not iceskating..lol!!!

Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/20/2013 12:57:00 PM

It has happened a few times .... yes. But not this winter .... at least not yet.:) :) - Thanks for your comments and your visit, Yasmin. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Anne Currin

Date: 1/20/2013 12:46:00 PM

I HATE slipping on ice! So embarassing, and so painful! This is a lovely poem, Anne Lise :)

Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/20/2013 12:59:00 PM

As an adult, it's so embarrassing...... Thanks for your comments and your visit, Anne. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Sukmawati Komala

Date: 1/20/2013 9:06:00 AM

Dear Anne Lise...what a lovely poem...thank you my sweet poetess for your great sharing... enjoyed so much <3 <3 <3 luv and big hugs ..:)

Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/20/2013 12:12:00 PM

Thanks for your comments and your visit, Sukmawati. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Husna Mirza

Date: 1/20/2013 3:43:00 AM

Dear Anne, Thank You very much for your kind compliment! And yes I love P soup! I think your poems are lovely and you're A great poet! Husna

Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/20/2013 5:16:00 AM

Thanks for your comments and your visit, Husna. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

JH Thomas

Date: 1/19/2013 11:51:00 PM

wow. how unfortunate yet it's a good poem - PJ

Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/20/2013 3:18:00 AM

Thanks for your comments and your visit, JH. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Rachel St.Cross

Date: 1/19/2013 9:43:00 PM

‡ LOL, Sooo Hilarious And Yet Not For They Whom Have Actually Expierenced Such A Mishap Or Unfortunate Moment As Something Similar Unto This, My Sweet Beautiful AnneLise ˜ I Can Vision These Scenario's In One Form Or Another Amid The Vibrant City's Bustling Crowd And There They Are, Eyes Desperately Darting About; Thinking Hurry Hurry, There Must Be A Public Restroom Somewhere ? Ooops, LOL. ˜ You Are Sooo Precious And I Love Your Pretty Verse And Thank You; Sweet Your Visit! ˜ My Love, Always, Rachel *

Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/20/2013 3:17:00 AM

Thanks for your comments and your visit, Rachel. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 1/19/2013 6:48:00 PM

Haha, too funny, Anne-Lise! I did see. Just kidding. Glad you didn't hurt yourself. It's the winter over there but it is sunny and in the 60's here. Great write!

Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/20/2013 3:19:00 AM

Thank you for reading my poem, and thanks for the nice comments, Toquyen. - (It's not nice said ..... but it's fun to watch when others fall.) oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

harry horsman

Date: 1/19/2013 2:42:00 PM

Oh yes this brings back memories,, just love this!!!!!!!

Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/19/2013 4:04:00 PM

Thank you for reading my poem, and thanks for the nice comments, Harry. -

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/19/2013 2:24:00 PM

I hope that not you but based on what happens when one gets on thin ice..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara

Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/19/2013 4:03:00 PM

Thank you for reading my poem, and thanks for the nice comments,Sara. -

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 1/19/2013 9:10:00 AM

I like this Anne Lise. No I did not see. You are safe with me. thanks for sharing. Lucilla

Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/19/2013 10:18:00 AM

Thank you for reading my poem, and thanks for the nice comments, my friend Lucilla. -

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/19/2013 8:01:00 AM

Dear Anne, You ask the question : Did someone see? My answer is... I wish I were able to see…ha-ha. Love it! Have a nice weekend. Thank you

Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/19/2013 10:17:00 AM

Thank you for reading my poem, and thanks for the nice comments,Demetrios. - (It's not nice said ..... but it's fun to watch when others fall.) oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

David Williams

Date: 1/19/2013 7:18:00 AM

Anne-Lise hope it's not true, we have lots of snow at the moment and I HATE SNOW...how is Arild?...have a peaceful weekend ...David

Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/19/2013 7:25:00 AM

- Arild it just fine. - - Give me 6 months of spring + 6 months of summer !! :) :) :) - Thank you for reading my poem, and thanks for the nice comments, David.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/18/2013 11:00:00 PM

hahaha, I know this feeling from when I was a young'un!!

Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/19/2013 5:54:00 AM

Thank you for reading my poem, and thanks for the nice comments,Andrea. - (It's not nice said ..... but it's fun to watch when others fall.) oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Kim Merryman

Date: 1/18/2013 7:06:00 PM

This is cute, Anne Lise! I can picture you looking around to see if anyone had seen you fall. Thank you for your sweet comments on my poems. I appreciate you taking your time to read them. Love, Kim

Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/19/2013 5:53:00 AM

Thank you for reading my poem, and thanks for the nice comments,Kim. - (It's not nice said ..... but it's fun to watch when others fall.) oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Yanny Widjanarko

Date: 1/18/2013 4:22:00 PM

I see! I see! gotcha! Hehehe, hilarious penned Anne, I just remember my old memory, i think worse than you are, I got slipped in the crowd and fell right on the wet mud, can you imagine how dirty was my jeans at that time and the shame that I've got? :p hehehe, i really enjoyed the freshness of your poetry today, have a wonderful weekend Anne - hug, yanny

Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/19/2013 5:53:00 AM

Thank you for reading my poem, and thanks for the nice comments,Yanny. - (It's not nice said ..... but it's fun to watch when others fall.) oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

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