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On Thin Ice

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On Thin Ice


Aware .....
Did someone see
My butt is sore
Did someone see
Now I'm sure both yellow and blue
Did someone see
I look around quickly
Did someone see
I wish I could shout loud
Did someone see
I get up in a hurry
Did someone see
I wet my butt
Did someone see




18.01.2013
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  1. Date: 4/19/2013 6:12:00 PM

    lol, I've been in this position before, good poem about ice Anne Lise!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 4/20/2013 1:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Highly appreciate your visit and your comments, Sheri. Thank you! - - oxox / / Anne-Lise:
  1. Date: 1/30/2013 7:02:00 AM

    Hi Anne Lise - I can relate to this, and can sense the embarrassment you felt and self-control you displayed when this happened to you. I joined the falling down club a long time ago. Once again, you have written an emotionally honest poem. - Much love, Gail

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/30/2013 10:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Highly appreciate your visit and your comments, Gail. Thank you! - - oxox / / Anne-Lise:
  1. Date: 1/23/2013 10:29:00 AM

    Lovely imagination penned quite nice. Loved always, my sweet friend, bl

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/23/2013 10:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Highly appreciate your visit and your comments, bl. Thank you! - - oxox / / Anne-Lise:
  1. Date: 1/22/2013 10:28:00 AM

    hahahaha..I picture myself before in your poem my dear friend Ann Lise (^__^). first time to do the ice skating and Its really hurt my butt for days..great poem from a great poet like you :) Hugs, Maria

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/22/2013 11:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes, it is painful to sit on your butt after a fall on the ice for days Maria. - Highly appreciate your visit and your comments. Thank you! - - oxox / / Anne-Lise:
  1. Date: 1/22/2013 9:50:00 AM

    nice write Anne...were you skating at the time?

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/22/2013 11:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    No this is when the streets are full of ice in winter time Joseph. - Thanks for your comments and your visit. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/22/2013 8:17:00 AM

    This is an excellent poem with an excellent image, too my dear friend Anne-Lise. Reading it gives me a great and wonderful vicarious experience on ice. Hope I can have a first hand experience someday. It's so fun I'm sure. Thank you so much for sharing and your wonderful comments on my latest poem! Have a blessed day to you and your family always! love and hugs, Leonora

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/22/2013 11:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Highly appreciate your visit and your comments, Leonora. Thank you! - - oxox / / Anne-Lise:
  1. Date: 1/21/2013 5:58:00 PM

    : ) Dont worry...nobody saw you! Good one, Anne Lise! Ruben.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/22/2013 1:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your comments and your visit, Ruben. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/21/2013 3:20:00 PM

    Ut oh..you fell down? Thanks so much for stopping by my writes. Light & Love

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/22/2013 1:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Highly appreciate your visit and your comments, Debbie. Thank you! - - oxox / / Anne-Lise:
  1. Date: 1/21/2013 12:57:00 PM

    So nice to return and grab a smile from your work as always... Be patient with me it will take some time to catch up... hugs n luv Michael

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/21/2013 1:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Take the time you need ....... :) Thanks for your comments and your visit, Michael. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/21/2013 11:43:00 AM

    The worries that women have.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/21/2013 11:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Maybe it is a "woman thing" ........ men do not care (?) Thanks for your comments and your visit, T.S.. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/21/2013 11:31:00 AM

    Had me chuckling because once I took a fall on a busy street and the contents of my purse flew all over. Many people stopped and I quickly got us as fast as I could and wondered if my butt was wet from the snow. It is natural to get up right away so thank goodness nothing was broken. Nicely done. love phyl

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/21/2013 11:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    As an adult, it's so embarrassing...... Thanks for your comments and your visit, Phyllis. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/21/2013 10:49:00 AM

    Absolutely charming! For the first 10 or 12 years of my life, I practically lived on skates... I miss those carefree days! Loved your poem... hugs and much love! xox

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/21/2013 11:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your comments and your visit, Jack. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/21/2013 4:40:00 AM

    Really liked this, it's so funny and creative. And it really captures the essence of winter time:) xxxxx

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/21/2013 10:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your comments and your visit, Amii. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/20/2013 1:06:00 PM

    Love the repetition of those lines....really shows the depth of concern for being seen at your worst by others! You made me smile! Great before I go to bed! Hugs! :)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/20/2013 1:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Good night and thanks for your comments and your visit, Eileen. - oxox / / Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 1/20/2013 12:46:00 PM

    I HATE slipping on ice! So embarassing, and so painful! This is a lovely poem, Anne Lise :)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/20/2013 12:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    As an adult, it's so embarrassing...... Thanks for your comments and your visit, Anne. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/20/2013 9:06:00 AM

    Dear Anne Lise...what a lovely poem...thank you my sweet poetess for your great sharing... enjoyed so much <3 <3 <3 luv and big hugs ..:)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/20/2013 12:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your comments and your visit, Sukmawati. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/20/2013 3:43:00 AM

    Dear Anne, Thank You very much for your kind compliment! And yes I love P soup! I think your poems are lovely and you're A great poet! Husna

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/20/2013 5:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your comments and your visit, Husna. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/19/2013 11:51:00 PM

    wow. how unfortunate yet it's a good poem - PJ

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/20/2013 3:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your comments and your visit, JH. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/19/2013 6:48:00 PM

    Haha, too funny, Anne-Lise! I did see. Just kidding. Glad you didn't hurt yourself. It's the winter over there but it is sunny and in the 60's here. Great write!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/20/2013 3:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for reading my poem, and thanks for the nice comments, Toquyen. - (It's not nice said ..... but it's fun to watch when others fall.) oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/19/2013 2:42:00 PM

    Oh yes this brings back memories,, just love this!!!!!!!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/19/2013 4:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for reading my poem, and thanks for the nice comments, Harry. -
  1. Date: 1/19/2013 2:24:00 PM

    I hope that not you but based on what happens when one gets on thin ice..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/19/2013 4:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for reading my poem, and thanks for the nice comments,Sara. -
  1. Date: 1/19/2013 9:10:00 AM

    I like this Anne Lise. No I did not see. You are safe with me. thanks for sharing. Lucilla

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/19/2013 10:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for reading my poem, and thanks for the nice comments, my friend Lucilla. -
  1. Date: 1/19/2013 8:01:00 AM

    Dear Anne, You ask the question : Did someone see? My answer is... I wish I were able to see…ha-ha. Love it! Have a nice weekend. Thank you

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/19/2013 10:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for reading my poem, and thanks for the nice comments,Demetrios. - (It's not nice said ..... but it's fun to watch when others fall.) oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/19/2013 7:18:00 AM

    Anne-Lise hope it's not true, we have lots of snow at the moment and I HATE SNOW...how is Arild?...have a peaceful weekend ...David

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/19/2013 7:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Arild it just fine. - - Give me 6 months of spring + 6 months of summer !! :) :) :) - Thank you for reading my poem, and thanks for the nice comments, David.
  1. Date: 1/18/2013 11:00:00 PM

    hahaha, I know this feeling from when I was a young'un!!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/19/2013 5:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for reading my poem, and thanks for the nice comments,Andrea. - (It's not nice said ..... but it's fun to watch when others fall.) oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/18/2013 7:06:00 PM

    This is cute, Anne Lise! I can picture you looking around to see if anyone had seen you fall. Thank you for your sweet comments on my poems. I appreciate you taking your time to read them. Love, Kim

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/19/2013 5:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for reading my poem, and thanks for the nice comments,Kim. - (It's not nice said ..... but it's fun to watch when others fall.) oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/18/2013 4:22:00 PM

    I see! I see! gotcha! Hehehe, hilarious penned Anne, I just remember my old memory, i think worse than you are, I got slipped in the crowd and fell right on the wet mud, can you imagine how dirty was my jeans at that time and the shame that I've got? :p hehehe, i really enjoyed the freshness of your poetry today, have a wonderful weekend Anne - hug, yanny

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/19/2013 5:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for reading my poem, and thanks for the nice comments,Yanny. - (It's not nice said ..... but it's fun to watch when others fall.) oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/18/2013 3:45:00 PM

    I love it,,,, that's just what I think when I trip over these river rocks where I live ;} you have a blessed day xoxo's ;}

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/19/2013 5:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for reading my poem, and thanks for the nice comments,Debbie. - (It's not nice said ..... but it's fun to watch when others fall.) oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/18/2013 3:29:00 PM

    Love your poem - so evocative of my ice skating years ago.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/19/2013 5:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for reading my poem, and thanks for the nice comments, Joann. - (It's not nice said ..... but it's fun to watch when others fall.) oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/18/2013 3:11:00 PM

    I can not stand on ice, in no way, shape, or form can I stand on ice! So yes, that would be me falling! But alas, I did not see you, did you really fall? I hope not! I truly loved reading this delightful and humorous poem this afternoon! What an enlightening piece, Great Work!!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/19/2013 5:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    No, I did not Russell. - Thank you for reading my poem, and thanks for the nice comments. - (It's not nice said ..... but it's fun to watch when others fall.) oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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