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  1. Date: 3/4/2013 7:36:00 AM

    LOVE IT!!! I saw a bit of myself in the 1st StanZa of this Awesome write!!! Thought for a moment it would all be about me...but then I noticed It weren't near long enough!!! Ha ha

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 6:05:00 PM

    Awesome Job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 6:04:00 PM

    My words to you on this one is; "SPECTACULAR WRITTEN."

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 2:38:00 PM

    Aspiring sentiment David.

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 12:47:00 AM

    awesome write David....you really are talented greatly,keep the spirit:),lol Janet"

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 3:16:00 AM

    My my! I really so like this poem and am tempted to agree with Yas here. Beautiful poem really and very rich in vocabulary, I had to google the meaning of some words! Well done here.

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 3:02:00 PM

    Wonderful write David you helped me add a few words to my existing vocabulary, Hologyny, sure it will come in hand some day xxx i

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 2:48:00 PM

    very eloquent Sir Knight, well spoken here by you, determination , putting any wrongs to right, the innner mans resolution, true...

    JOHNSON Avatar DON JOHNSON Date: 2/15/2013 3:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    the necessary balance for the Lady that it fits, man eternal seems to have of charm and wit, well done here David...
  1. Date: 1/20/2013 1:52:00 PM

    Beautiful writing!

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 12:37:00 PM

    Someone has to speak about men as well! I suggest you be voted the man of the year! Beautiful and thoughtful writing, Thank you!

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 10:28:00 AM

    This was awesome! I'm so impressed and must say...I have a new appreciation for men! ;) I don't know what you would think of my poem, the Nature of Man. If I've piqued your curiosity...have a read! :) Thanks for the visit! :)

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 7:13:00 AM

    Good morning David, and a lover of me..of course he is... how would we do with out... and yes Terry, on the bottom... we want more... now give me' give me" JK... by the way David, if this is you all of the above.. I think you need to be cloned and be send to the USA.... LOL... hope you get me soup mail... TEX

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 4:35:00 AM

    David, you've let it out of the bag... now THEY will be expecting even MORE from us... Terry (great poem, though)

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 4:04:00 AM

    Hi David wonderful sums us up I think, by the way did you have a dictionary for breakfast wow what grweat words, all the best my friend take care in the white stuff Owen

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 3:11:00 AM

    Ohhh, that is sooo awesome! I love it. That is exactly how I think about men. Handsome, virile, passionate, incredible, gentle, among things... Too good, David. Love it!

  1. Date: 1/19/2013 8:29:00 PM

    Sounds like the ideal to me!!! where oh where do we find this model? hahaha. love it!

  1. Date: 1/19/2013 6:44:00 PM

    Oh my David, this must be a mirror image....Seren

  1. Date: 1/19/2013 4:59:00 PM

    I think this is true of YOU ;) Light & Love

    Williams Avatar David Williams Date: 1/19/2013 5:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Debbie as I said to Mandy ...I wish...
  1. Date: 1/19/2013 3:29:00 PM

    love love love! I didn't even know it was completed yet! I do so love you men.

    Williams Avatar David Williams Date: 1/19/2013 4:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thvia actually when I read yours it was one of the words that instilled me to write this...Thank You...
    Stein Avatar Thvia Stein Date: 1/19/2013 3:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    after posting this I I googled hologyny. It was already a word. Well I'm a bit put out about that but at least I used the rules of english correctly when I thought I was making it up.
    Stein Avatar Thvia Stein Date: 1/19/2013 3:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    also i love how you incorporated the word hologyny, wasn't sure if anyone would get the meaning of it as coming from the word hologynic (vs holandric). I kind of used the rules of the english language to create that word!
  1. Date: 1/19/2013 9:39:00 AM

    You get a 7 for this one. We know that all men are created equal, I think some are more equal than others. Thanks for sharing. Have a nice day. Lucilla

  1. Date: 1/19/2013 6:39:00 AM

    Thanks David .... then I learned something new today too. - Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 1/19/2013 5:59:00 AM

    wow David,, brilliant poem, this sure puts the spotlight on men...

  1. Date: 1/18/2013 4:59:00 PM

    AWESOME WRITE MY FRIEND! You described me to a T...Now what about the lesser wanna be's! Ha ha! (I think Chris and I think along the same lines.)

  1. Date: 1/18/2013 3:44:00 PM

    David, this is a wonderfully penned poem depicting the Gods -- Oh! Wait! This poem....is....about....uhhm....errrr....men?? Oh my, I completely misinterpreted this poem, but thoroughly enjoyed reading it regardless.

  1. Date: 1/18/2013 1:31:00 PM

    Men..though every problem seems to start with nen such as menopause ..mental illness ..meningitis...anyways and other men causes :)..I do believe that life would be boring without them.Awesome tribute to men.Now you should write one about wo men..Ow gee.men there too :)

    Williams Avatar David Williams Date: 1/18/2013 1:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thvia already has..
  1. Date: 1/18/2013 1:30:00 PM

    Men..though every problem seems to start with nen such as menopause ..mental illness ..meningitis...anyways and other men causes :)..I do believe that life would be boring without them.Awesome tribute to men.Now you should write one about wo men..Ow gee.men there too :)

  1. Date: 1/18/2013 1:13:00 PM

    This is such a masculine and wondrous write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous and fabulous poem this afternoon! What a powerful piece, such a grandiose poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 1/18/2013 12:45:00 PM

    Very nice poem here David.Love it.

  1. Date: 1/18/2013 11:31:00 AM

    oooh what a good write, are these all of your wonderful qualities David, silly me of course they are... xx

    Williams Avatar David Williams Date: 1/18/2013 11:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ha Mandy I wish...