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Gun in Hand

Bitter hardened steel of death
Warm soft tissue fed by breath

From the breath steel comes to life
From cold steel a breathless wife

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  1. Date: 2/26/2013 4:32:00 PM

    WOW, yours is dang good!!!! Congrats, Chris.

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 10:29:00 AM

    Congrats on your win!Love your couplets.

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 10:25:00 AM

    Many congratulations on your number 1 Chris xx

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 9:01:00 PM

    Chris, Congratulations with your winning poem in Rix's "A "Gun"-o-ku " contest. Goodnight~ LINDA

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 8:05:00 PM

    Chris! This is superb writing with its succinct message! Please refer to my lil blog! Appreciated this outstanding entry! Sincerest regards, gwendolen

  1. Date: 1/18/2013 1:56:00 PM

    I see you now have the Poetry bug. It can be intoxicating.

    Damstrom Avatar Chris Damstrom Date: 1/18/2013 2:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes.. Yes I do..
  1. Date: 1/18/2013 11:32:00 AM

    thnx... no need to worry .. I would defend my wife

  1. Date: 1/18/2013 11:23:00 AM

    i like it but a bit worrisome... -izzy