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First Time

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First Time

Yes I am fine
And how are you
My day has been good and a little consuming
Yes I’m looking forward to getting off and relaxing
I’m sorry to hear you’re not doing as well as expected
Wish I was there to help ease your sadness
Maybe soon I will be there for comforting
I’m lost for words and crying
Your first ever” I LOVE YOU BABY” was unexpected
I love you too, this is so exciting

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  1. Date: 1/19/2013 10:43:00 AM

    Woah cool poems! You have a unique way of writing!:D Husna

    A A Avatar Ale A A Date: 3/2/2013 3:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you. It's very simple but one of my favs.