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Dancing with the Sun- Haiku Trilogy

                  His invitation
       Came gently with a warm kiss
               I couldn't refuse

             He gave me his arm
           A golden ray of sunlight
              To lead me outside

           I danced with the sun
         Enveloped in his brilliance
              Endless love affair

          Eileen Manassian Ghali

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  1. Date: 1/19/2013 4:23:00 PM

    Lovely and romantic haiku, Eileen.- Have a lovely weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 1/19/2013 8:24:00 AM

    wow these are awesome....

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 1/19/2013 4:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :)
  1. Date: 1/18/2013 7:28:00 AM

    Oh!!I could go so many ways with this one..The sun's warmth to kiss our skin bringing that chemical change within our body wonderful..I could go with the romantic side...I could go and I did dancing with the Son..Enjoyed reading ..Sara

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 1/18/2013 11:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Sara....your opinion is so valuable to me! Thanks, my dear, for sharing your sentiments! God bless!
  1. Date: 1/17/2013 4:47:00 PM

    you're such a romantic, but your romantic poems are absolutely lovely!

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 1/17/2013 8:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Ilene....yes, dear. I'm hopelessly romantic! Thanks for the post! Hugs!
  1. Date: 1/17/2013 11:46:00 AM

    ‡ This Is Beautiful Eileen And I Am A Lover In Love With Love ˜ Sooo Enchanting Your Beauty's Soft Lovely Voice; Kissing The Sun ˜ My Love, Always & Forever, Rachel *

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 1/17/2013 8:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, my dear! I always appreciate your kind words and encouragement! Hugs!
  1. Date: 1/17/2013 9:49:00 AM

    Fantastiko! Excellent in conception and in expression! Bravo! Liked it very much!

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 1/17/2013 9:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks every so much! :)