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FATE'S UNFAIRNESS

I love to send this sad thought
of fate's unfairness into oblivion,
forgetting as it had never occurred
and troubled me in the tenderest years;
could I really forget all the wrath
which I had to face holding back tears?
A lost youth can't be replaced...
one looks back and realizes its dimension.    


Were others more deserving than I?
My glances showed no envy, but desire was way too intense
to find happiness or even a little joy,
and delight in someone's loving smile; 
why did fate continuously deny me
to exult love in its splendid ways with an amorous sentence? 
 

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  1. Date: 1/31/2013 9:41:00 PM

    Andrew, congratulations with your poem in frank's "Something to forget " contest. enjoyed the ending... pd

  1. Date: 1/22/2013 7:28:00 PM

    Congrats on your win, Andrew - Ralph

  1. Date: 1/22/2013 2:26:00 PM

    I've felt this way for years and then we must think ..how have we grown..because we are alone? When not alone I tend to focus all my energy on others giving away bit after bit of me. Conrad's on your winning writes. Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/22/2013 3:00:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win, Andrew.

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 9:29:00 PM

    Fantastic Andrew,great win!

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 8:58:00 PM

    Congrats Andrew on your special win xxx